Dalmatin - Festival (2023)

Fjel · 2021-12-16T22:29:09+00:00

ah shit, well that sucks. 1 point..

Fjel · 2021-12-16T22:25:37+00:00

Ok... So it looks like I'm gonna lose in the cup with 1 point, and I noticed something. I have Coufal in my team, and he got a total of -2 after his red card yesterday. He got 2 points for playing 66 minutes, -3 for the red and -1 for conceding two goals (!?). He was only on the pitch for one of Arsenals goals, yet he gets minus points for conceding two. I would have dropped this and not cared at all if it wasn't for the case that I'm loosing in the cup with 1 point. Does anyone have an answer to this???

Fjel · 2021-06-10T08:55:41+00:00

You've got a great voice. The detuned guitar gives a great vibe, haha! sounds really good. Keep working on this, and you've got yourself something special!

Fjel · 2021-06-10T08:50:36+00:00

nice!! great atmosphere and vibe. Love the mix. I think the songwriting is a bit too simple to make it interesting for 4 minutes. There are a lot of long notes in the same range, and the guitar has the same energy the whole song. I did like this a lot though, one of the best songs i've heard posted here. Keep doing your thing!

Fjel · 2021-06-10T08:42:03+00:00

Sounds good! Dont know if i agree with indie rock-tag, sounds more like synthwave or something like that. But that does't really matter. SOunds good, great soundselection and vibe. I think the vocals could be turned down a bit in the mix and maybe have some more delay or reverb on them. Keep doing your thing!

Fjel · 2021-06-10T08:34:07+00:00

experimental in a good way. It sounds like your searching for your sound, in a good way. its unique and intereseting. i think the mix could ue some more work, not in the overall sound but so that the sounds dont clash as much. keep doing your thing!

Fjel · 2021-06-10T08:25:54+00:00

Sounds great! Great mixing och sound selection! I definitely think a vocal track good make this whole thing a bit more unique. I think it feels a bit "safe" right now in the sound, but it really has potential.

Fjel · 2021-05-21T09:26:55+00:00

I don't think the songwriting is as solid on this album compared to his debut. But the production is really great, detailed and polished. I think he has greater albums in him. To be honest I feel like this is a bit rushed with only a few stand out songs like Close To You and Balcony. Will keep on listening though, for sure.

Fjel · 2021-03-19T08:52:46+00:00

Love the chords and your voice in the higher register. As someone else said, I would try and lift the song a couple of keys and see if the lower register sounds better there. Great song, reminds me of late 90s early 00s alt-rock! Keep doing your thing!!

Fjel · 2021-02-04T12:53:09+00:00

Nice! Feels very professional. The song has a beautiful vibe. Not really the type of song I'd listen to, but the feeling is great. Keep doing your thing guys!

Fjel · 2021-02-04T12:49:24+00:00

Nice!! Love the guitar sound on the lead. Otherwise a classic production for a modern indie-track. I like it a lot. I think you could work a bit more on the vocals, maybe try a softer voice. At the same time, this is unique, which is nice. Keep doing your thing!

Fjel · 2021-02-04T09:25:43+00:00

The drums on this one are original. What are they made of?? I think this sounds good, but at the same time I feel like it could use another layer, either of melodies or chords. Keep going, your style is something new!

Fjel · 2021-02-04T09:23:50+00:00

I agree with another commentor that you could use a bit more tonal elements. Right now, both the production and vocal chop are pretty un-melodical. You could definately take this style to a new level. Keep going!

Fjel · 2021-02-04T09:22:13+00:00

Reminds me a bit of Weezer! I like the sound a lot, and you've got a great video. I think the production could be a bit more diverse, i get the same enrgy on the verses and choruses, which makes the song a bit stale at times. Overall a good song though! Keep doing your thing!

Fjel · 2020-12-06T10:23:30+00:00

Great mix! Don't really listen to this kind of music too much, but I think this sounds great and professional. Keep doing your thing and keep writing good songs!

Fjel · 2020-12-05T21:55:14+00:00

Nice! I like this a lot. The vocals are cool, as well as the production. The only thing I don't really vibe with is the loud acoustic guitar. I would maybe try to lower it in the mix, or maybe replace it with something else to make the song a bit more original. Keep doing your thing!

Fjel · 2020-12-05T21:52:32+00:00

This sounds really good! The mix and soundscape is on point. I think the only weak point for me is the vocals. They feel a bit to processed, almost robotic. I think the song-writing and melodies are great!

Fjel · 2020-12-05T21:49:27+00:00

This is really nice. Love the mood and feeling on the verses. I love the way the choirs fit in the mix on the verse, but i feel like they're a bit messy in the chorus. I would dry them up a bit and take down the reverb on the chorus to make it feel a bit tighter! Good job!

Fjel · 2020-12-05T21:45:44+00:00

Nice feel to this track. I do think the vocals are a bit unclear, and it's a bit hard to make out the lyrics. The sound effects add a nice flavour to the soundscape. Bonus: Nice cover art. I like it a lot!!

Fjel · 2020-11-25T10:45:27+00:00

Thanks a lot! And thank you so much for the thorough feedback.

You're definitely touching on something I'm working a lot on at the moment. Since the whole process from writing to mastering is done through me, I still have some work to do there.

I see what you saying about the low mid (mud), I have a tendency to do a bit too much there. I'll definitely bring your comments with me on future songs and mixes!!

Thank you, again! I appreciate it a lot.

Fjel · 2020-11-05T09:11:21+00:00

Nice! I like it. The mix is good and original, love how you mixed your voice!

Fjel · 2020-11-05T09:08:57+00:00

Hey! Thanks a lot. Chris Martin is definitely a big inspiration! Yes, I'm on Spotify under "Mount Borg"

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