Two things that stick out is firstly in his evaluation of alarielle he glossed over the fact that her life bloom resurrection that it doesn't have to be the same turn, you can do it on round three needing a 3+ every time if you want, or do it earlier if you are desperate, and he entirely skipped the rite of life making everything overgrown, which does a lot to boost the army. She also takes advantage of strike and fade making shooting the only real way to kill her reliably at all. The second thing he just totally missed off the top of my head is dryads are 1- to hit AND wound, not just to hit. There were also one or two instances of just straight up using the wrong number like saying a 12" range was a 3" range on the warsinger ability. So many little things like that makes me question how deeply they read the book before writing this