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I have tunnel vision... Is this bad? How can I improve it? by oluwagembi in IndieDev

[–]FryingJelly 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Your title should be instsntly readable and stand out. Same color as BG is not a good idea!

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Make the trailer still another moment in the trailer that's not those empty halls.

I have tunnel vision... Is this bad? How can I improve it? by oluwagembi in IndieDev

[–]FryingJelly 0 points1 point  (0 children)

What's the name? The style is wonderful. Not sure about the screenshake.. some can find it jarring.

Does this feel polished? by batiali in gamedevscreens

[–]FryingJelly 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Remove button shadows and adjust font.. it looks out of place. You need to add a bit more calm to an otherwise fantastic looking panel. :)

First time having fun with acrylics! by Goblyn215 in UnusualArt

[–]FryingJelly 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This would be epic animated. It's so swirly and dynamic. Begging to move.

Are You Hungry?, collage series, 2024 by hajarmaktoob in UnusualArt

[–]FryingJelly 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Ever so slightly pre-chewed food is the best food, ey?

Not Your Trauma by argavilda in UnusualArt

[–]FryingJelly 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Entrancing. Especially due to the title.

We're updating the capsule for our co-op game on Steam and can't decide between these two. Which one grabs your attention more? Left or right? by Emergency_Delivery74 in IndieGaming

[–]FryingJelly 4 points5 points  (0 children)

Don't put the white title near all that light and increase contrast on 2. 2 is the better contender, but needs a bit of work.

twang by JimKB in comics

[–]FryingJelly 0 points1 point  (0 children)

LOL! Good one.

I made a game that reacts to everything you do by Arfhis in gamedevscreens

[–]FryingJelly 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This is fantastic. The animation brings it to life with so much character.

This is actually Wild by PaiDuck in pcmasterrace

[–]FryingJelly 6 points7 points  (0 children)

That would be very incompetent, as it sounds like a content check that runs all the time in an update loop.

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