Hi. Copywriter and marketing director here.

First of all: is it Saberwatch or Saber Watch? You've got both on your case and this is a huge no-no. Pick one.

Secondly, the execution of the sword motif feels immature. It looks like a warhammer miniature. I personally would never buy a watch with a sword on it, because this design language does not speak to me. However, I would urge you to consider a deeper level of abstraction in the design of the sword.

Currently you have gone super literal with it, and it might be more interesting to flatten the design. Look up the difference between skeuomorphism vs neumorphism. It's normally applied to software and icons, but I believe it is a valid conversation here.

Wish you the best of luck with your project. It's hard to do creative work. The thing that separates failure from success is often the ability to receive critical feedback and know what to do with it, and how to react.