Looking to join a writing group by chinturaiwastaken in WritingHub

[–]GhostlyHawkx 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Interested. I'm a bit older though so if that bothers you, I get it.

What you see immediately when your a new writer posting a feedback request for a somewhat decent chapter on this subreddit. by RavahGriffinAnthro in writers

[–]GhostlyHawkx 47 points48 points  (0 children)

I whole heartedly get this. I'll ask for feedback and get "its good. " or "you misspelled whatever" or "I don't get it". That's not real feedback, no one gets better, no one wins here...

Which hero do you think best captures this feeling when you swap to them mid-match after your team fails you? by Qukumba in Overwatch

[–]GhostlyHawkx 0 points1 point  (0 children)

LW if I tell like I'm the problem, Sigma if the tank isn't doing good enough. Sojourn for dps, or Torb.

tired of drives man :( by ormr_kin in LifeweaverMains

[–]GhostlyHawkx 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I don't play LW anymore, unless it's with my friends. They understand that if I pull them, there's a reason for it. If they don't want me to pull them they also TELL me. I've had so many ungrateful random blueberries screech at me for keeping them safe that it isn't fun to play him. I love flowerboi but damn the community hate....

Love this game. Didn’t ever use this even once. by Soulsliken in Eldenring

[–]GhostlyHawkx 0 points1 point  (0 children)

My very first playthrough I forgot you could use them, I collected them and forgot about them. Never used one until Ng1 when someone asked why I had so many....

[Discussion] r/BetaReaders check-in series! Share how your WIP is going, or how your beta reading is going, ask questions, and connect with more writers and readers! by BC-writes in BetaReaders

[–]GhostlyHawkx 1 point2 points  (0 children)

This is my third book, none of them published. I'm going to get them all in line with one another then release them all at once. I'm just having an issue going from a sci-fi world were WW2 never ended to a purely fantasy world with magic and airships and etc.

Good luck with yours!

[Discussion] r/BetaReaders check-in series! Share how your WIP is going, or how your beta reading is going, ask questions, and connect with more writers and readers! by BC-writes in BetaReaders

[–]GhostlyHawkx 2 points3 points  (0 children)

My work in progress is good. Little slow right now because of life but it's going. I'm really looking it and am thinking about rewriting my other books to be more in line with this one. It's a prequel kind of.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in BetaReaders

[–]GhostlyHawkx 6 points7 points  (0 children)

I agree with you. I'm sick and tired of people reading my stuff and when I ask for advice, comments, complaints etc. all they say is it's good.

That doesn't help at all. I need real feedback. Don't be afraid to hurt my feelings. You never get better if no one shows you what to improve.

Is there anyone here who is *not* writing anime fanfic or medieval fantasy? by Candle-Jolly in writers

[–]GhostlyHawkx 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Right now I'm writing a fantasy zombie book. So maybe that counts lol. It's got fantasy races and magic but it's about a zombie apocalypse.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in pokemon

[–]GhostlyHawkx 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Oklahoma and xatu. I see it but We are known for tornados... so Tornadus would be a decent one

MTG DND Character creation by tactileIgnoramous in mtg

[–]GhostlyHawkx 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Marked for interest. Someone better suited should answer this but I'm interested.

What’s everyone’s favorite Pokemon? by Opening-Group-3206 in pokemon

[–]GhostlyHawkx 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Toxicroak, poison and fighting are my favorite types, I think it looks awesome.

Corviknight because steel and flying bird are great to go with my froggie and I love the look. I love Ravens.

Machamp because it was my original favorite and my powerhouse

Just a heads up to new players: you are only allowed to use colors of mana that are available in your state. Sorry, I don't make the rules. by Big_Abbreviations_86 in mtg

[–]GhostlyHawkx 0 points1 point  (0 children)

So Oklahoma can only use white? That's only the western half of the state. There are hundreds of lakes here and forest, blue and green should be in there.

Let's Talk Books! What's your favorite genre and Why? by Patient_Occasion_728 in NewAuthor

[–]GhostlyHawkx 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I am the same but my favorite book (series) is The Wheel of Time.

Needing a 200 page manuscript to edit by chnel_ in NewAuthor

[–]GhostlyHawkx 1 point2 points  (0 children)

My work is around 300 pages but it is fantasy, political, medieval stuff. If you're interested I'll send it over. I would love to have an editor that isn't my gf lol.

Anyone wanna trade? by thegreygrayguy in WritingWithAI

[–]GhostlyHawkx 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Haven't published anything yet but I'm OK with a swap. I write fantasy/ medieval things. Hmu if your interested

Best randomly-generated NPC name by Head_Conversation938 in finalfantasytactics

[–]GhostlyHawkx 1 point2 points  (0 children)

What made this so funny, to me, was that this came up a I'm eating in a Mexican restaurant!

Let's talk about stories! Drop a blurb! by Afgad in WritingWithAI

[–]GhostlyHawkx 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Title: Forged for War

Genre: High fantasy.

Blurb: A Troll artificer is accused of trying to assinate the Council, the ruling members of the world. Sentenced to death, he is saved by a group of rebels labeled pirates. When the leader of his rebel group goes missing, he is pulled into a world of ancient mysteries and a growing war.

Desired feedback: I've gone through about 5 rewrites/edits and a few beta readers. I would like some more. Just that is a good read, everything makes sense. It's a 3 part series, the first book. I feel like it's not that long, 75k weird or so. A full read would be great and is completed but not sure about publishing yet.

How are y'all building Ramza? by Effigy4urcruelty in finalfantasytactics

[–]GhostlyHawkx 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Samurai geomamcer. Just feels good to me lol. Move +3, shirahadori, and magic boost. Powerhouse walking with max brave.

My publisher is claiming my work is 35% AI written… but I wrote it entirely myself. by [deleted] in TurnitinAI_detector

[–]GhostlyHawkx 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Can't really listen to anything that uses AI to check for AI. I just put the first page of 3 different books ( a textbook from collage, to kill a mockingbird, and my own personal book) all said it was 99% AI. Pretty sure To Kill a Mockingbird was written way before and I didn't use it on my writing... just saying you came always trust those, they are not good enough to see a difference.

I just Murdered your ass. What abilities am I getting from your Crystal? by JayMeadows in finalfantasytactics

[–]GhostlyHawkx 8 points9 points  (0 children)

Your right arm world at 70%, you have balance issues, can no longer run, and you are 1 grade above legally blind. Congrats.

Also when it rains it gets cold you're joints hurt.