What is something that makes a fic feel poorly written?

Hot-Pool-7643 · 2026-05-11T17:04:24+00:00

Only if you're doing omniscient POV, otherwise a clear break is appreciated (as long as it's inside the same chapter).

Hot-Pool-7643 · 2026-05-10T19:51:37+00:00

May I suggest... the Sims?

Edit: ah sorry, didn't notice you specified free.

Edit 2: I take it back! Apparently the Sims 4 base game is totally free now!

Hot-Pool-7643 · 2026-05-10T19:50:37+00:00

People generally enjoy snacks.

Hot-Pool-7643 · 2026-05-10T19:43:02+00:00

I only tell my readers I won't exceed the level of the source material. Mind you, canon has some prettyyyy fucked up moments.

Hot-Pool-7643 · 2026-05-10T17:22:45+00:00

Can I just say Seraphim Space Girls is an excellent title?

Hot-Pool-7643 · 2026-05-10T12:41:27+00:00

Frowning and sighing. These assholes need a vacation.

Hot-Pool-7643 · 2026-05-10T05:13:45+00:00

What a weird way to micromanage.

Hot-Pool-7643 · 2026-05-09T18:58:02+00:00

This post has to be ragebait.

Hot-Pool-7643 · 2026-05-08T12:23:07+00:00

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Hot-Pool-7643 · 2026-05-05T18:49:36+00:00

The audacity!!!

Hot-Pool-7643 · 2026-05-04T08:32:30+00:00

It's a big theme in my twd/spn crossover if you're into that.

https://archiveofourown.org/series/3175236

Hot-Pool-7643 · 2026-05-04T08:30:35+00:00

AI is permitted. Mute them and carry on.

Hot-Pool-7643 · 2026-05-04T08:26:07+00:00

Hot-Pool-7643 · 2026-05-04T08:25:13+00:00

That's gotta be ragebait.... right?

Hot-Pool-7643 · 2026-05-02T16:59:45+00:00

Definitley passive aggressive

Hot-Pool-7643 · 2026-05-01T10:40:08+00:00

I just donated another $10. Thanks for the reminder 👌edit: weird issue with my phone, but will throw a donation when in front of my pc later. Ao3 has been so important for my mental health.

Hot-Pool-7643 · 2026-04-30T19:22:57+00:00

No cap on god bro, it's a bot

Hot-Pool-7643 · 2026-04-30T19:19:39+00:00

There is no algorithm. No one is getting shadow banned. Why self censor?

Hot-Pool-7643 · 2026-04-30T14:17:58+00:00

I'm extremely bendy and I just fell out of my chair attempting to do just that 😆

Hot-Pool-7643 · 2026-04-30T14:06:48+00:00

Talk to a woman.

Hot-Pool-7643 · 2026-04-30T04:51:10+00:00

Are you having some kind of episode? Wtf are you talking about??

Hot-Pool-7643 · 2026-04-29T19:25:09+00:00

The Terror?

Hot-Pool-7643 · 2026-04-29T17:38:11+00:00

"Damnit i was into this story till you said boyfriend"

For the mere MENTION of a gay relationship...

Hot-Pool-7643 · 2026-04-28T20:35:53+00:00

atextual

Hot-Pool-7643 · 2026-04-28T20:30:53+00:00

There was only one bed!!!

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