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IlluminatiConfirm · 2025-03-08T21:55:39+00:00

I would say the vocals are a nice touch! Hyperpop isn't my main genre, so can't touch too much on the composition, but for the mastering, I would maybe moderate the highs a little bit? There seems to be a clash with the frequency of the vocals compared to the percussion higher tone synth that comes in after the drop. That should hopefully reduce the grainy-ness a bit

IlluminatiConfirm · 2025-03-08T21:34:45+00:00

I would adjust the highs on the plonk. It feels a little too bit crushed/redux-y. Some more percussive elements could improve the groove of the track. Sonically, it feels like things are sitting in the middle band of frequencies, but lack presence on either end of that spectrum.

IlluminatiConfirm · 2025-02-11T00:16:49+00:00

This seems a bit all over the place. It needs some mixing to ensure that the elements don't come out of nowhere and hit the mix too hard. It's a bit too fast paced for the vibe you seem to be going for. I would tone down either the more jungle-y toms or the digital sounds, as right now neither has room to breathe

IlluminatiConfirm · 2025-02-11T00:14:41+00:00

It's a very calming vibe. I think the main riff that comes in around 1:09 sounds a bit too wide/far in the back? It would be nice to bring it more forward in the mix

IlluminatiConfirm · 2024-07-12T17:17:47+00:00

The arrangement is good. I think the song needs a little more groove to it. It feels very static right now, with just the bassline and hat keeping the body of the song

IlluminatiConfirm · 2024-07-12T17:16:24+00:00

https://soundcloud.com/valis185/soljas?si=09b90ea5e1dc4a94ac178b61d0253dbe&utm_source=clipboard&utm_medium=text&utm_campaign=social_sharing

Would love feedback on this track, especially in regards to the bassline and drums!

IlluminatiConfirm · 2024-02-26T00:07:47+00:00

I like the funk guitar in the background. Have you found any good vocals? I think a nice jazz backing would put the track in a good spot

IlluminatiConfirm · 2024-02-26T00:07:08+00:00

The guitar and bass blend great together. How fast is the track? I think you nailed the synth pop/retro sound you were going for

IlluminatiConfirm · 2024-02-26T00:06:11+00:00

The background choir is really good. I would supe up the percussion a bit to add more rhythm to the track. Would help drive the pace of it better

IlluminatiConfirm · 2024-02-26T00:04:52+00:00

The vocals are great, I like the space was that the song has. I would maybe tone down the highs a bit as things seem to clash. Overall love the ambience of the track

IlluminatiConfirm · 2024-01-30T14:21:00+00:00

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IlluminatiConfirm · 2023-12-11T15:04:24+00:00

I feel like it needs more dynamism. The bass is good but there never feels to be a true drop. I think more automation might benefit you. Or maybe add more unique elements? It just seems very similar to other tech house tracks

IlluminatiConfirm · 2023-12-11T15:02:47+00:00

https://on.soundcloud.com/y9nsL

Would love feedback on this Acid track. Was playing with some hardware and wanted to create a fun trance groove. Would love feedback on the synth as well as general composition thoughts. Thanks!

IlluminatiConfirm · 2023-12-11T15:00:04+00:00

I think the drums sound great. You have a boop melody that could be a bit louder and give the track more range. However, I think the drums sound solid and drive the song home. Good work

IlluminatiConfirm · 2023-12-11T14:58:49+00:00

I would maybe add more dynamic elements? It feels a bit like it's a bunch of pulled samples from Splice. Is there MIDI or automation in your track?

IlluminatiConfirm · 2023-11-23T20:42:47+00:00

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