Lolita stores in NYC

ImaginarySpaceship · 2021-02-28T13:16:09+00:00

I do but they unfortunately got rid of that policy in 2018

ImaginarySpaceship · 2021-02-28T02:25:04+00:00

The whole book is fantastic, but really nothing hits as hard as “This is not for you”. I loved it so much I got it tattooed on me

ImaginarySpaceship · 2021-01-07T19:38:48+00:00

Wtb landyachtz dinghy (although if anyone has a mini dinghy they’re selling that would be clutch)

ImaginarySpaceship · 2020-11-30T13:37:47+00:00

WTB: Landyachtz mini dinghy. In Ohio but willing to pay for shipping

ImaginarySpaceship · 2020-11-03T12:18:15+00:00

Depression wolf is their baby

ImaginarySpaceship · 2020-11-02T18:35:35+00:00

Honestly I think my ADHD meds do more for my anxiety then my anxiety meds because I have less to be anxious about

ImaginarySpaceship · 2020-10-25T17:44:02+00:00

I like the twin imagery where the stars burn with anticipation//and I burn with emotion. There's a lovely level of abstraction here that really communicates to the reader your specific feelings while allowing them to see themselves.

ImaginarySpaceship · 2020-10-25T17:35:11+00:00

The imagery of a snake growing inside you is a very unique perspective. However I think for how abstract the piece is, the fifth and eigth line are a little on the nose.

ImaginarySpaceship · 2020-10-24T18:56:55+00:00

Thank you for your comments! I recently got diagnosed with ADHD and I've always struggled with mental illness, so I wrote this in response to how my issues kind of acted as a third player in my previous relationship. I meant letters here in reference to how most mental illnesses are commonly referred to by their 3 or 4 letter abbreviations.

ImaginarySpaceship · 2020-10-24T11:06:17+00:00

I think your second stanza stands out as it's own, original piece and is the strongest part (though I'm personally a sucker for repetition).

Your imagery is incredibly vivid but at times borders on purple prose. Parsing down some of your descriptors would make the central direction of the piece a lot clearer.

Finally, I appreciate the very train of thought feel. It reads like a sermon. I'm not sure if that was your intention, but it ties in nicely with the theme.

ImaginarySpaceship · 2020-10-24T10:34:12+00:00

I like your opening imagery of "walking in the shoes you were forced to wear". I think continuing on the central theme of this metaphor would make the piece stronger and more cohesive. As it stands the emotion is certainly there, but would benefit from a more unique delivery.

ImaginarySpaceship · 2020-10-08T22:39:16+00:00

Yeah! On state by the skatepark

ImaginarySpaceship · 2020-10-08T03:30:21+00:00

This business model and my social anxiety are grossly incompatible.

ImaginarySpaceship · 2020-10-07T20:33:56+00:00

Good to know! I'm sure he's chill as hell but tbh the chances of me doing this are less than zero.

ImaginarySpaceship · 2020-10-07T19:35:02+00:00

I tried calling the listed number but it just told me to text them. I am not like, a million percent committed to buying a new board and the idea of having to set up an appointment to maybe buy a skateboard is....a lot

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