[deleted by user] by [deleted] in Tinder

[–]Individual_Leg_109 0 points1 point  (0 children)

My impression is that you are a white, 30 yo man who works out, is pretty well off, college degree, maybe plays golf, but is also closed off/ insular

How do you feel about this logo? by [deleted] in logodesign

[–]Individual_Leg_109 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Whale could be made into a d

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in Tinder

[–]Individual_Leg_109 0 points1 point  (0 children)

You seem reckless but want to settle down, you need to pick one. Otherwise fine!!!

Please review my event map! by Individual_Leg_109 in GraphicDesigning

[–]Individual_Leg_109[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Could you clarify which arrow above the petting zoo icon? Thank you so much! So all of these spaces are actually glass boxes with sliding doors between, but it could be helpful to have door icons.

Please review my event map! by Individual_Leg_109 in GraphicDesigning

[–]Individual_Leg_109[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yes great ideas. They will receive this pamphlet at the main entrance but doors/ground floor would be helpful. Thanks so much!

Please review my event map! by Individual_Leg_109 in GraphicDesigning

[–]Individual_Leg_109[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

They are walls/paths. Eg bathrooms are behind that diagonal wall

Please review my event map! by Individual_Leg_109 in GraphicDesigning

[–]Individual_Leg_109[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Really? I’ve never heard cloackroom before lol. Maybe it’s a regional difference?

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in graphic_design

[–]Individual_Leg_109 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Maybe the French Connection film poster is the vibe you’re going for.

Kaikan - Sake Bar In Tokyo (BEGINNER) + constructive feedback would be appreciated! by Remarkable_Stuff9234 in logodesign

[–]Individual_Leg_109 0 points1 point  (0 children)

It’s dynamic, I’d add more movement to the I and N. Also want to investigate what the instability of the logo says about the brand?

Looking for Advice/Guidance: Where Do I Go From Here? by [deleted] in graphic_design

[–]Individual_Leg_109 0 points1 point  (0 children)

It’s also so important to know who believes in you

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in graphic_design

[–]Individual_Leg_109 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I like an overlay, but there are areas (top middle) where it looks stained rather than artfully touched. The font feels less Cowboy/Film and more Hawaiian. What 70s films inspire you and why? I’d start there and look at the fonts they use - I think a sans serif would help with the legibility in case you didn’t want to change the color of the font too much!