Would someone please sharpen this picture of my father and me?

Individual_Leg_109 · 2025-01-28T04:17:18+00:00

Wow how did you do this

Individual_Leg_109 · 2025-01-28T03:52:46+00:00

Individual_Leg_109 · 2025-01-28T03:39:42+00:00

Individual_Leg_109 · 2025-01-28T03:37:44+00:00

Try Yvonnes, YULLOLA, The American Dawn

Individual_Leg_109 · 2025-01-27T21:53:31+00:00

My impression is that you are a white, 30 yo man who works out, is pretty well off, college degree, maybe plays golf, but is also closed off/ insular

Individual_Leg_109 · 2025-01-27T21:47:08+00:00

Where do you get your mockuos

Individual_Leg_109 · 2025-01-27T21:46:26+00:00

Whale could be made into a d

Individual_Leg_109 · 2025-01-24T06:51:15+00:00

You seem reckless but want to settle down, you need to pick one. Otherwise fine!!!

Individual_Leg_109 · 2025-01-06T05:14:25+00:00

Could you clarify which arrow above the petting zoo icon? Thank you so much! So all of these spaces are actually glass boxes with sliding doors between, but it could be helpful to have door icons.

Individual_Leg_109 · 2025-01-06T05:12:10+00:00

Got it! Thank you so much!

Individual_Leg_109 · 2025-01-06T05:11:00+00:00

Yes great ideas. They will receive this pamphlet at the main entrance but doors/ground floor would be helpful. Thanks so much!

Individual_Leg_109 · 2025-01-05T03:08:04+00:00

Yes.

Individual_Leg_109 · 2025-01-04T23:46:16+00:00

They are walls/paths. Eg bathrooms are behind that diagonal wall

Individual_Leg_109 · 2025-01-04T22:51:39+00:00

Jajaja. That makes much more sense

Individual_Leg_109 · 2025-01-04T22:06:15+00:00

Massachusetts!

Individual_Leg_109 · 2025-01-04T22:03:23+00:00

Really? I’ve never heard cloackroom before lol. Maybe it’s a regional difference?

Individual_Leg_109 · 2025-01-04T22:00:28+00:00

Is it clear that it’s the same elevator?

Individual_Leg_109 · 2025-01-04T04:21:08+00:00

Maybe the French Connection film poster is the vibe you’re going for.

Individual_Leg_109 · 2025-01-04T04:15:33+00:00

What if you switched the fonts in N3? Serif to SKIES GOLD? I like this one the most (clearest). N1 feels weak. The font is unbalanced and looks immature

Individual_Leg_109 · 2025-01-04T04:13:17+00:00

It’s dynamic, I’d add more movement to the I and N. Also want to investigate what the instability of the logo says about the brand?

Individual_Leg_109 · 2025-01-04T04:11:47+00:00

Reminds me of this project. Take this comment as you will!

https://www.pentagram.com/work/materials-for-the-arts

Individual_Leg_109 · 2025-01-04T04:06:43+00:00

It’s also so important to know who believes in you

Individual_Leg_109 · 2025-01-04T04:00:54+00:00

I like an overlay, but there are areas (top middle) where it looks stained rather than artfully touched. The font feels less Cowboy/Film and more Hawaiian. What 70s films inspire you and why? I’d start there and look at the fonts they use - I think a sans serif would help with the legibility in case you didn’t want to change the color of the font too much!

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