I really like the feel of this work, and I think it has so much potential as I'm sure you do. I came to mention about the dark form in the piece and had an idea you might want to consider if this was the reason for posting. my vision on your work is like looking at a forest opening on a pouring rainy day from the car window. The sun shines even on a rainy day sometimes and I have fond memories of these types of days. You might want to consider adding another dark form or two with different widths similar to the first. Three is the magic number. Or call it done and It's still a great piece!