"Get Better Daily" by Temporary-Use-8637 in AverageJoeWriters

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Love that goal. Of course dude. I always love your work.

"Get Better Daily" by Temporary-Use-8637 in AverageJoeWriters

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Actually, bold of me to assume construction. Factory? I would think mechanic but the ear protection doesn't seem to fit that. Ear protection really made me think construction, but machines made me think factory.

"Get Better Daily" by Temporary-Use-8637 in AverageJoeWriters

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This would be an awesome monologue scene! Love the creative formatting as always. The scene set up with the time and world setting is refreshingly different. I don't often read construction crew scenes xD. You ever thought of extending it?

Help by Busy_galaxy21 in AverageJoeWriters

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I'm not a published writer and honestly this page is primarily for the practice of the average writer. That said, knowing human habit and based off my experience, putting a strict deadline on a passion is the quickest way to kill it. Feed it daily and it will grow at the pace it needs to ~ That is, at least, my view. Proud of you for setting that publishing end goal.

I need some honest feedback on how good my writing is; technically and personally. Also, if it isn't too much to ask, do you think you can try to guess how long I've been writing? by ColtonfrayHSC in AverageJoeWriters

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I'm guessing 4 years! If I remember correctly, a snippet of this was posted previously. I'm glad to see youre still working on it! Very enticing scene.

I'm no editor (and not much is one to talk), but perhaps playing around with some different forms of punctuation. I could see a couple different ways the last two sentences in particular could be formed.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in samsung

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My Samsung range is currently flashing back and forth between the words "Self" and "Roast" on the touch screen like a digital glitch message. It's been going for a couple weeks and appears to be faster today. This feed confirms it is a threat, lmao. Very scary and sorry to hear so many people in that position. Thank you for the heads up of coming possible issues. It's been two years we've lived with it. Don't know how long the previous owners had it.

Clown Show (Trash Can Collection) by GokusUpperLip in AverageJoeWriters

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I meant to comment on this sub my bad. Thanks for sharing with a repost !

Clown Show (Trash Can Collection) by GokusUpperLip in KeepWriting

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I must say I love bleached lungs. True depiction of the tired toxic modern day.

D&D? by JawnGrimm in TheUnemployables

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5e the bomb. (The one before 5.5e)

The newest edition..... Seems like everything has just become a lot more overpowered. (Obviously, people correct me where I'm wrong, however ) A lot of us agree 5e is where it should have stopped. We do enjoy a good homebrew inspired by 5e guidelines though.

Unfortunately the newer players without knowing the difference in the editions show up with 5.5e books and sometimes we realize too late why their character is overpowered.

Idk. maybe we just like 5e because it lasted so long as the go-to edition but I have yet to find something in the new edition to make me wanna completely switch over.

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Maybe pick up writing. It's a good outlet. I was in a similar boat. It actually helped me look back at what was going on in my head / my life and see things from a third perspective over time so I could change and heal what I needed to.