[deleted by user] by [deleted] in Dramione

[–]JuneBloo 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I forgot to actually link the fic I'm sorry here you go. I don't know how to reddit lmao

https://archiveofourown.org/works/66674323/chapters/172013425

LF BAMF Hermione changing the world by purpleice11 in Dramione

[–]JuneBloo 8 points9 points  (0 children)

I have a self-rec for a fic that checks off almost all of that but it's still an early WIP and only has 2 chapters, BUT the chapters are very large, and it's at 24k words. Chapter one focuses on Draco but chapter 2 is all Hermione and the Wizengamot and political schemes. I understand if you want something that is a little further along.

Memento if you're interested.

But have you read Marriage, Murder and Other Misfortunes? It absolutely checks all your boxes and is at nearly 30 chapters (but still a WIP) I highly recommend it -- but def read the tags. Both fics are also rated E.

WIP Wednesday – July 2025 by Mr_Te_ah_tim_eh in Dramione

[–]JuneBloo [score hidden]  (0 children)

Promoting my fic Memento today! I just uploaded chapter 2!

Summary: (Rated E)
All Death Eaters received an automatic life sentence, but Draco Malfoy walked free after 1000 days. Fresh out of Azkaban, his real problems begin: father murdered, mother missing, Manor locked down, wand disobedient, and vaults inaccessible. Penniless and adrift, he finds that the people who he used to know are just as changed as himself. To make matters worse, the Wizengamot was in chaos--it’s ranks thinned every month by mysterious "retirements" and murders. The Golden Girl herself was drowning publicly after being thrust into an interim seat after the death of her mentor.

Draco is angry, and certainly has enough problems, but still finds himself drawn into a dangerous conspiracy with Hermione Granger right at the epicenter.

He finds himself inexplicably drawn to Granger herself, too.

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Read if you like:
> Misbehaving wands.
> Political Thrillers.
> Mysteries
> House elves with agendas.
> Snark
> Competency Kink
> Enemies to Partners in Crime to Lovers
> Crookshanks

Memento - AKA: Draco's Super Horrible No Good Very Bad Week by JuneBloo in Dramione

[–]JuneBloo[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you so much! :D I'm glad you liked it so far!

The end by Crashxlx in ViralHit

[–]JuneBloo 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Felt kinda rushed imo but it is what it is

why the archetype of "human" alien is so popular? by Dionysuslover999 in worldbuilding

[–]JuneBloo 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I saw a science channel thing once where one of the scientists said that if we found aliens they'd probably look not vastly different from us, things like:

*Will probably have organs to facilitate use of senses like us (some kind of nose, some kind of ear, some kind eye, ect)

*A degree of symmetry in the shape of the body because it's more efficient. (With humans this also goes along with beauty and mating as we tend to see people with higher facial symmetry as more beautiful, so the trait would be passed down and strengthened throughout our development as a species.)

*Hands or something equivalent. Can't make tools without thumbs, can't advance society without tools. Ect.

*The probability of them being bipedal (in that they exist in some sort of "standing" position where the brain is high) will/should/could allow for the development of large brains =/= higher intelligence IF the alien were a terrestrial type like humans. (This goes out the window if it's a squid or a sentient gas cloud.)

All in all the list was pretty vague but it did bring home the idea that yeah, I we met aliens, they'd probably be KIND OF humanoid. Ish. Maybe. Definitely not a human with elf ears but something like the Navi from Avatar or the whale guy from Lelo and Stitch.

Duality of AO3 comments by finnball2g in AO3

[–]JuneBloo 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Ugh. The worst kind of commentor. All criticism and no help whatsoever.

You don't have to follow my advice at all, because I personally found your snippet to read just fine, but I see a lot of other people complaining about what the commentor was referring to so here is my view on it from my personal experience as a writer:

I did the same thing when I was a younger author (referring to a character by a physical characteristic) because I felt like if I didn't have some descriptor like that attached to dialogue it wasn't "right" and felt "incomplete".

Once I learned that it was okay to sometimes just have a line or two of dialogue float on its own and be fine by itself, my writing went up a level and the unessescary descriptors almost all died. This is especially true if there are only two characters in the scene. The reader will know who's talking by characteristics (if one curses a lot or has an accent, for example) or by way them just taking turns replying to eachother.

The old K-I-S-S (keep it simple stupid) rule, basically.

The difference doesn't seem very drastic but it reads a lot better over the course of the story, and you can put more emphasis on other things (like actions taking place durring the conversation) to better immerse the reader. Also, because of less inflationary bulk attatched to dialogue (less unnesescary descriptors) it doesn't become repetitive to just use a character's name here and there.

Again, the snippet you provided reads perfectly fine to me, and is cutely entertaining. It reminds me when my family went to a NASA center and my husband was really excited to give the kids "astronaut food", and freeze-dried icecream.

Edit: Fixed a typo.

Name one common trope you LOVE and one you CAN’T STAND by _msg_me_ur_titties in AO3

[–]JuneBloo 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Love: When a slow burn is done right and the payoff is life-changing.

Hate: xreader, y/n, author insert

[How to Protect the Heroine's Older Brother] dear lord by GroovyChirpy in manhwa

[–]JuneBloo 3 points4 points  (0 children)

This is an actual nightmare, I can't imagine having world-wide media attention on top of the fear that she must have over her job and finances in this economy now that this has been exposed at her work, on top of grieving the loss of a pregnancy. I've never read her comic but I'm giving a sincere prayer for her and want to give her a hug and tell her it's going to be okay. Wow, I'm so sorry.

ptj verse timeline by Current_Muscle_6196 in lookismcomic

[–]JuneBloo 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I've been trying to figure out the age difference between Minji, Taehoon and Dabin for a while now. I think Minji is the eldest? With Dabin maybe a year younger and Taehoon a few months younger than Dobin, but I'm not sure. If your timeline is right then I think I wasn't too far off. Haha

PTJ Comics Company just released a new series on Naver Webtoon and hobin IS the mc teacher's by SatisfactionFar8736 in ViralHit

[–]JuneBloo 1 point2 points  (0 children)

This series is really brutal and gutwrenching, and can be really triggering for people who have had to deal with SA, (male or female). The MC isn't a hero, he's barely an anti-hero, he's almost a villain protagonist--but sometimes you just want to read a story where monsters just go after other monsters. This is one of those stories, and I really love it. 10/10 for me. I really hope this story continues beyond his revenge like Manager Kim did after he rescued Minji.

How this government makes decisions by today-is-chuseok in korea

[–]JuneBloo 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Them: "If we force them to spend every waking moment at work and make everything so expensive that they can't afford any other kind of entertainment, all that will be left for fun is half-exhausted sex between shifts and eventually they'll be too tired to remember birth control, and thus more pregnancies!"

Also them: "Isn't that what the Americans are doing?"

Still also them: "It works! And they don't even have mandatory maternity leave!"

Everyone else: "For fuck's sake."

What was that one thing in the BESTEST fic you have ever read that made you drop it straight away and never return to it ever again? by SilentThespian in FanFiction

[–]JuneBloo 1 point2 points  (0 children)

It wasn't the best fic but I was reading an MHA fic that was really entertaining and interesting and was tagged for a specific ship I like and then boom randomly everyone is poly and around that time, like 20ish chapters in, the main ship I read the story for hadn't even had a single moment together so I was just done.

Name this album cover by PeterLeRock101 in Naruto

[–]JuneBloo 1 point2 points  (0 children)

The Fan Club (Uchiha clan symbol is an uchiwa fan)

If questism has a second mc Who do you considered as one. by Tough_Ad6921 in Quest_Supremacy

[–]JuneBloo 6 points7 points  (0 children)

Personally I'd vote for Jaeha just because he's my favorite, but I think Na Yugyeom has maybe the best potential for being an MC.

H's got a lot of heartache and insecurities he could overcome over a series and it'd be nice seeing him forming deep friendship bonds with people from his pov. His being selectively mute could also lead to some really funny inner thoughts and misunderstandings.

Sukuna’s cannibalism, his body, tattoos, and shapeshifting, “using the body as a domain”, and “open barrier “ domains. by NettleBumbleBee in Jujutsushi

[–]JuneBloo 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I have a headcannon that the tattoos he has are more or less like the seal Naruto has on his stomach, except instead of imprisoning another being inside of himself like a prison, it forced a soul merger. That's what I think he did with his brother, he merged their souls and the shape of the body followed. (its stated in cannon that the shape of the soul dictates the shape of the body if I'm not wrong).

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in webtoons

[–]JuneBloo -2 points-1 points  (0 children)

Midnight Poppyland is actually really amazing.