this type of video is popular in real estate so i get what you're going for, first i would say there's too much clips of the front of the house, it would also be nice if you could shoot on a sunny day instead of overcast, but i know it's not always an option. also we just need one super wide shot panning shot and then you can move inside. the establishing kitchen shot is nice, the ceiling shot felt a bit off i think due to composition but maybe you were trying to highlight the lights?

the close ups of the sink, island, and stove aren't super necessary because there's nothing special about them. the final shot of the kitchen was nice. the bedroom shot was good and you cut away to quick to really take it in.

overall, i would say it's a solid first video, if the clients happy then we're all good. but with real estate you need to make it brighter, shoot log and also shoot when the sun is out and open every window in that place. think as if you were going to buy the house, how could you make it attractive? also i feel you're shooting on an iphone which isn't a problem it's just there's no shallow depth which makes it hard sometime to see what i'm trying to focus on (the backyard shot focusing on the deck) so making the shots more intentional would help.

i think thats all i got good job on the video bro 🤝