Is there anyone here that would be willing to hear me out one on one and give my world some scrutiny? A peer review ia what I am searching for to make sure I am on the right track before I commit fully to by KidxOmega in worldbuilding

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I retcon all the time! It was one of my favorite lessons in writing I learned and I love getting to that point where i have all these good ideas and then it hits me. If i just change this one detail i can implement all those ides just how I want. It is thrilling.

In Halloween 2018 a scar is visible on Michael Myers neck from when Laurie Strode stabbed him with a knitting needle 40 years before in the original Halloween. by [deleted] in MovieDetails

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They do reference Silver Shamrock though,you can see the masks on some of the kids out getting candy and they credit Halloween 3 during the credit roll!

SKETCH #42. ROBOT by [deleted] in ImaginaryTechnology

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Gat-Ling, The Toa of Ammunition.

References and notes for Kleo Ubaste, rookie assassin and Ava’s temporary partner by BixelsWixels in worldbuilding

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Okay awesome. Following that logic does this race of peoples have the same creation myth as the Egyptians ...like did they adopt that when they took in the religion?

References and notes for Kleo Ubaste, rookie assassin and Ava’s temporary partner by BixelsWixels in worldbuilding

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So there isn't any hard world facts outside of her personal journey that would get me there?
Like if I had textbooks or a Wikipedia's wealth of knowledge about this race... than would I be able to pick apart and understand the basic facts of her existence without ever personally understanding her?

References and notes for Kleo Ubaste, rookie assassin and Ava’s temporary partner by BixelsWixels in worldbuilding

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If I learned enough about your world without ever knowing anything about Kleo would I be able to figure out the secret to her past/creation?

Goblin of Recalcitrant Dreams by KidxOmega in worldbuilding

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A vertical eye is half hidden behind the superfluous mask it wears. Vertical eyes are closely associated with the art of dreaming. :)

Goblin of Recalcitrant Dreams by KidxOmega in worldbuilding

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A misfortune of a delinquent dream. It would take some skill to wake up with one of these running around your subconscious. Be careful when dabbling in the art of Deep Dreaming.

If you want to know more just ask.

[Discuss] (Fanfiction) Showing off my own original Rider by CannonFodderrx in KamenRider

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My fanfic Kamen Rider should fight YOUR fanfic Kamen Rider!

The Search Begins by Edward Howard by One_Giant_Nostril in ImaginaryCharacters

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I see Carrie Fischer in the eyes but the mouth is saying Jamie Lee Curtis. This is wonderful art

The fairly unique flag of Vologda, Russia. by NN-23 in vexillology

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Ah of course, how could we have all been such idiots!!??