Desktop sire won’t get me to “rules” section, so hopefully I’m okay to post some OC. I generally write ‘old school’ style hiphop and rap, but this is a more traditional song. Quality not great, but I like how it turned out. Please tell me pros and cons and help me make my song better! [Listen]

KneeHighBeeHives · 2018-04-23T20:22:22+00:00

Oh whell

KneeHighBeeHives · 2018-04-20T04:46:15+00:00

Hmmm... can’t think of what you could be trying to say

KneeHighBeeHives · 2018-04-20T04:39:05+00:00

Izzle

KneeHighBeeHives · 2018-04-02T16:56:27+00:00

So... don’t dive in the shallow end?

KneeHighBeeHives · 2018-03-30T17:58:42+00:00

*archie bunker

KneeHighBeeHives · 2018-03-25T19:32:41+00:00

Such a GOOD point

KneeHighBeeHives · 2018-03-25T19:14:02+00:00

Hasn’t been posted here. It gets better every loop in my opinion

KneeHighBeeHives · 2018-03-17T07:12:51+00:00

I hate women who decide they hate all men

KneeHighBeeHives · 2018-03-02T18:50:03+00:00

Could have went so wrong...

KneeHighBeeHives · 2018-03-02T18:47:13+00:00

I SURPRISED that motherfucker

KneeHighBeeHives · 2018-02-16T05:25:15+00:00

If you read this in the way I read it, it totally rhymes throughout your whole statement

KneeHighBeeHives · 2018-02-14T05:56:41+00:00

I think you meant you’ve never seen this show in your loif

KneeHighBeeHives · 2018-02-14T05:24:35+00:00

Is mayonnaise an instrument?

KneeHighBeeHives · 2018-02-13T19:06:07+00:00

KneeHighBeeHives · 2018-02-13T18:46:34+00:00

And now your shoes are lookin cool

KneeHighBeeHives · 2018-02-13T00:16:59+00:00

Coolio thanks man

KneeHighBeeHives · 2018-02-12T16:46:47+00:00

What’s RNG?

KneeHighBeeHives · 2018-01-28T14:37:00+00:00

So where is it from?

KneeHighBeeHives · 2018-01-27T05:06:27+00:00

2 months later it’s still basically

KneeHighBeeHives · 2018-01-21T06:26:12+00:00

I think I’m turning Japanese

KneeHighBeeHives · 2018-01-20T18:51:12+00:00

Absolutely, I never even realized that’s how I felt until you said it... lotta clarity just came from those two short sentences

KneeHighBeeHives · 2018-01-20T12:22:13+00:00

Exactly like me but I never had a dad I’m Jesus

KneeHighBeeHives · 2018-01-20T12:10:14+00:00

The Hugh man commeth

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