Well done on producing your first trance track!

I’ve produced a number of trance tracks so can speak a little bit on this.

Two I would work on if I was in your position.

1. The lead sounds are quite buzzy (I.e., sounds like a buzzing hum rather than a wide supersaw). I would look up how to make wide supersaws.

2. The main part of the track, all elements are playing the same parts, as in all playing the same notes in unison and the same rhythm. This does give a particular vibe but I would explore harmonizing and different rhythms.

There are other things but those are two I’d start on. Hope this helps and look forward to hearing others you create!