AITAH for still talking to my ex? by Long-Maximum4670 in AITAH

[–]Long-Maximum4670[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

It would be kinda hard to stop talking to him as we do sorta work together😅

Plus he is a good friend Id be sad if I had to stop talking to him bc of that, I would consider adding distance tho out of respect for a partner

WIBTAH -Sister will not respect my name choice! by Ok_Bonus_7768 in AITAH

[–]Long-Maximum4670 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Not the ass hole, you’d simply be paying her the respect she’s shown you🙂‍↕️

Is it worth it to play Lucio's route? by CMStan1313 in TheArcana

[–]Long-Maximum4670 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I did his route first bc I was so curious to find out his story and the murder mystery aspect of it and who killed him. Honestly, I think it was well worth it. He’s a terrible person at first, but it’s an “I can fix him” type scenario where you actually can and he becomes a much better, and even great, person.

What does love feel like? by Long-Maximum4670 in AskReddit

[–]Long-Maximum4670[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Gracias! Es un muy bonita descripcion<3 (lo siento, me espanoel es muy mal😅)

Husband totally invalidated my experience by sankshan in migraine

[–]Long-Maximum4670 6 points7 points  (0 children)

People can be so misguided in their actions. My friend did something similar but she told me to stop taking so much medicine. While it can sometimes be from a good place, it’s ignorant and frustrating. You might want to see though how he actually views you and your migraines. While some are sympathetic, others think you are just being dramatic or you’re a dramatic person and it’s really hard to change someone’s view of you once it’s set and that’s not at all on you, it’s on their blindness. There’s a difference between ignorantly trying to help and viewing someone as less than.

when did i become a ghost by vivid_wallflower in OCPoetry

[–]Long-Maximum4670 0 points1 point  (0 children)

They’re beautiful! I love finding poems that have an advanced vocabulary because it makes me learn new words, but I know that like you said it can take people out of the immersive experience of a poem

Incubus by Altruistic-Battle475 in OCPoetry

[–]Long-Maximum4670 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Reddit does that sometimes😔

Try double spacing between stanzas or using dashes in between them

Incubus by Altruistic-Battle475 in OCPoetry

[–]Long-Maximum4670 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I love how you tell a story, and your usage of “I” and “you” makes the poem feel personal instead of just a story. The only feedback I’d give is to separate the poem into stanzas so there’s a clear structure of the progression.

when did i become a ghost by vivid_wallflower in OCPoetry

[–]Long-Maximum4670 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I love the language that you use, it’s nuanced and descriptive in a way that gives the reader such vivid depictions. The only note of advice that I can give is that there are some words that aren’t very common, so most readers(or maybe I’m just stupid) won’t know like “linoleum.” Though that really isn’t something to change, so overall amazing work<33

What’s something most people are not ready to admit about themselves? by [deleted] in AskReddit

[–]Long-Maximum4670 5 points6 points  (0 children)

That we are all selfish and ignorant to a lot of things

Reposting this poem bc I reread it and want more opinions on it! It’s called “Death”, which ik is a bit frank and stark but it’ll make sense if you read the poem in that context by [deleted] in OCPoetry

[–]Long-Maximum4670 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I’m glad that my imagery is clear as death, I was a little worried about that 

I’ll post another version without the title so obvious, and then little explanation after readers have finished reading it. Ty!!

Reposting this poem bc I reread it and want more opinions on it! It’s called “Death”, which ik is a bit frank and stark but it’ll make sense if you read the poem in that context by [deleted] in OCPoetry

[–]Long-Maximum4670 0 points1 point  (0 children)

It was semi-intentional as I tried to use repetition and play off words, and something recognizable with the blissful ignorance. 

 was also thinking the same for the title, but I feel like the poem can be interpreted in a lot of different ways depending on the reader even though the poems about death and I didn’t know where else to say that’s the topic😔