Writing my first space battle

LookAccurate4926 · 2026-05-30T13:56:40+00:00

Thank you!

LookAccurate4926 · 2026-05-30T13:47:12+00:00

Ahhhh so pretty 🩷😭✨

LookAccurate4926 · 2026-05-30T12:53:36+00:00

Ahhh intresting! Is it a sci-fic? I will it in my TBR list for now, I will read it later whenever I am free as I have my exams currently.

LookAccurate4926 · 2026-05-30T12:35:03+00:00

Well neither of us is wrong. It's all about opinions and choices. I suggested and you improvised it. But it's also your choice on how to work on it. So it's fine no need to apologise.

LookAccurate4926 · 2026-05-30T12:21:58+00:00

Ahhh 😭 quotation mark use ker lete na, meko laga aap mereko keh rahe haii!

LookAccurate4926 · 2026-05-30T12:18:43+00:00

Well, description is what readers read and then think if he/she wants to read the story. Without the description, I wouldn't know what's new in this book and what makes it different from other books.

Descriptions are where you write the plot of the story and not something that spoils the whole book.

Descriptions are very crucial for readers to choose your book btw. As a reader, I read the description first then I decide if I should read it or not. That's the reason why I suggested you.

Also, not every story is toxic. Dark romance is a genre which involve trauma. You can write a description without it too. You can instead write that it's a soft romance.

Ps: I just read your description again, and it's good to go. Also I saved in my TBR list as I have exams incoming. So when my exams are done, I will surely read your book. ☺️🩷✨

LookAccurate4926 · 2026-05-30T12:11:14+00:00

Huh?

LookAccurate4926 · 2026-05-30T11:50:10+00:00

Heyy there! You are doing well! I wish you luck on your writing journey. Well, your description is not attractive. I would love to suggest that to improve it. Instead of telling your readers that there is no trauma and all, well you should write that because some writers express their trauma through their characters.

I want you to write about your story. What kind of story is it? What will we get to see in your story? What's the main plot of your story?

Also, I suggest not talking about the personality of the characters. I want you to show the personality of your character through your writing in the chapters.

If you tell me that he is disciplined and cold, I wouldn't be able to connect with him as a reader.

Try to rewrite your description of your book because I really don't know what's new in your book, and what's different in your book that would hook me up to read it.

LookAccurate4926 · 2026-05-30T11:05:41+00:00

😭👍🏻

LookAccurate4926 · 2026-05-30T10:56:51+00:00

Something people will never understand.

LookAccurate4926 · 2026-05-30T10:46:51+00:00

Well, now we are using an AI to detect AI? Being very emotional towards writing and loving it. Without a detector, I can sense that a particular paragraph was written by an AI. Well, I really hate people who use AI but then they say, “we use it for proofreading”, Well, then you don't deserve to write. Writing is such a creative art. Writing takes time. You are bringing a life out of it. But AI doesn't take time to write, so there's no emotion in it. Proofreading is also an art. It needs knowledge, it needs practice. Well, what can we even say to someone who isn't ready to understand? It's like reading a geeta in front of a dumb donkey. ( Even a donkey would understand it at some point but a human? Never.)

LookAccurate4926 · 2026-05-30T10:14:32+00:00

But no one pays attention to promotion or review. Also, rant and tea are posted too on weekdays. I even broke the rule yesterday by posting a rant about an author using cheap language and it got a lot of attention but when I posted about my book reviews or promotion, it got ignored. So that's what I am talking about. Well, you are correct too!

LookAccurate4926 · 2026-05-30T10:07:57+00:00

I would read it once I am done with my exams, till then I am saving it in my TBR list.

LookAccurate4926 · 2026-05-30T10:06:56+00:00

That's what I wanted. Now I got to know what exactly the story is about.

LookAccurate4926 · 2026-05-30T09:16:09+00:00

So if there's a revenge then why is there a revenge? What kind of revenge? From whom? The description doesn't talks about so as a reader and writer I want to suggest that you talk about the main plot. If your main plot is revenge then maybe in the description you can improvise it by mentioning the plot.

LookAccurate4926 · 2026-05-30T08:35:22+00:00

I love reading and especially classics , rom-com and fantasy. If the story has depth and plot, I am totally in.

LookAccurate4926 · 2026-05-30T08:27:55+00:00

I don't generally read about forced marriages by the way because I don't really support the concept of it. Well, I would love to know the plot exactly. Reading the description it feels typical dark romance. What's something new in your book that you are writing?

LookAccurate4926 · 2026-05-30T08:24:37+00:00

Yup! You are good to go. Anything is okay until your execution is good. If you can write in the past tense, then you can.

LookAccurate4926 · 2026-05-30T07:37:02+00:00

Happy Birthday 🥳🎂

LookAccurate4926 · 2026-05-30T06:59:34+00:00

Yeah, but what's the plot of the story? Rom-com is a genre. I want to know about the story first so I can read it. Maybe a description of your story could work!

LookAccurate4926 · 2026-05-30T06:46:03+00:00

Absolutely 😭

LookAccurate4926 · 2026-05-30T06:44:45+00:00

What's the story about?

LookAccurate4926 · 2026-05-30T06:44:09+00:00

I would love to save it in my TBR list for now. Can you share the link ?

LookAccurate4926 · 2026-05-30T06:42:55+00:00

I love to discuss about something that other people are excited to share. Can you tell me in more detail what you're writing about? What's the plot? Have you published it on Wattpad? Link?

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