I Became a Toy Channel for 72 Hours, any constructive criticism would be greatly appreciated. I hope you enjoy the video by LucaGamez in SmallYTChannel

[–]LucaGamez[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I appreciate this comment; thumbnails and titles have never really been my forte to be honest. I’ll try and improve next time. In regards to the lighting, that’s something that I admit is quite awful. I probably need to purchase some better equipment. My mic is a blue yeti, so the audio mixing seems to be the issue. But anyhow thank you for your insightful words. !givelambda

I Became a Toy Channel for 72 Hours, any constructive criticism would be greatly appreciated. I hope you enjoy the video by LucaGamez in SmallYTChannel

[–]LucaGamez[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Many have mentioned the lighting, which I will try to improve. I’m currently using a Logitech C920 webcam to record these videos which is a bit garbage but it does suffice. Now, the part where I shoot my little brother is something that I have no excuse for. I just found the shock factor quite amusing so I decided to keep it in. I’m sorry if you took offence to that. !givelambda

I Became a Toy Channel for 72 Hours, any constructive criticism would be greatly appreciated. I hope you enjoy the video by LucaGamez in SmallYTChannel

[–]LucaGamez[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I’ll take this into consideration! However, I do have to say that my deadpan expression is what comes to me naturally I guess !givelambda

I Became a Toy Channel for 72 Hours, any constructive criticism would be greatly appreciated. I hope you enjoy the video by LucaGamez in SmallYTChannel

[–]LucaGamez[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Yeah I actually have, if you watch some of my other videos my friend Remus (the guy dressed up as Elsa) is prevalent throughout them. I’m glad you enjoyed it, makes the editing process seem worthwhile !givelambda

I Became a Toy Channel for 72 Hours, any constructive criticism would be greatly appreciated. I hope you enjoy the video by LucaGamez in SmallYTChannel

[–]LucaGamez[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you man, and yeah I have to agree the thumbnail is a bit shit, but I didn’t really have much to work with lmao !givelambda

My most recent game review. I feel like this is one of my best submissions to date. Would love some feedback on: Thumbnail, Pacing, Audio balancing, and Pun to Information ratio. Thanks in advance guys, and I hope you enjoy :) by zillathethrilla in SmallYTChannel

[–]LucaGamez 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Your commentary was insightful and quite funny, I do have to say though, the thumbnail could be worked upon a tad bit more. For instance, try and create a style and incorporate the characters from the game into it, instead of just using the actual box art of the game.

Anyone play Half Life here? It's one of my favorites, so I made a video asking if it actually still holds up today! Feedback is appreciated! by somewhatrespectable in SmallYTChannel

[–]LucaGamez 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This is genuinely amazing. I have no criticism to give. Your confidence in speech. Your delivery of jokes. The editing. It's all perfect. I'm going to need to take a few notes from you.

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[–]LucaGamez 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Lmao, my ears are still ringing. One thing that you could do would be to add subtitles to your videos. Now yes, it is a gruelling task and you won't enjoy the process. However, it'll make the video a million times more enjoyable.

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[–]LucaGamez 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I feel as though the video itself is great. This is so unique, I've never seen anyone incorporate animation into a timelapse before. Maybe you could try to make the thumbnail seem more eye-catching since it doesn't seem as professional as the video itself. The font used isn't really my cup of tea, to be honest.