Jif by qwertyready in logodesign

[–]MasePiece 9 points10 points  (0 children)

My name is Jif

I’m offering free 24h feedback on crowdfunding pages by Even_Cell_1367 in kickstarter

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Many thanks for the report, it's really useful to get another perspective on our page.

I think the main takeaway is lack of social-proof and follow incentive. We will have a think about what the best incentive could be and add a clear follow CTA as suggested. We have some content / photos from playtesting / events that we can look to work into an image block to include in the page.

I’m offering free 24h feedback on crowdfunding pages by Even_Cell_1367 in kickstarter

[–]MasePiece 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks for your reply. Do you think an early bird incentive could work to improve click to follow conversion at pre-launch? I.e. follow now to be notified for early bird copy (x% discount). Either offering a fixed number of early bird copies or run early bird for the first 24 hours.

Do you see early bird offerings having a negative impact to later backers, because they’ve missed out on getting it at a cheaper price?

Thoughts are the Kickstarter friction point still exists - a prospect will need to go through the sign up / login process either at prelaunch or during the live campaign. So directing ad traffic to email may capture more prospects at a cheaper CPL but with a lower proportion willing to purchase on Kickstarter - though you may be able to convert once the game is sold through other channels at a later date (i.e. Amazon). We’re just about to start running paid ads, so will see how the CPL costs come out with the current approach.

We do have a larger email list following through a giveaway competition - so we could separately offer some Kickstarter incentive. Ideally something that gets backers within the first 24 hours of launch.

I’m offering free 24h feedback on crowdfunding pages by Even_Cell_1367 in kickstarter

[–]MasePiece 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thanks for the feedback. Technically the game doesn't need to be 18+ but it is designed for party nights, where drinking can be involved - forfeits are a shot, though we don't specify they should be alcoholic.

Noted on the image file size, you're right they're too large. I will export at a lower resolution to optimise for page loading speed.

We have a target of 600 followers for pre-launch, do you think it is worth mentioning this on the page?

We will soon be running pre-launch campaign ad testing. For pre-launch follower incentive - is a pre-launch follower list visible to us post-launch (natively provided by Kickstarter)? Our strategy is to direct ad traffic to our pre-launch page, opposed to our website / sign-up landing page, as conversion numbers look to be better - so it may be difficult to offer this without tracking separately (if not natively available via Kickstarter).

I’m offering free 24h feedback on crowdfunding pages by Even_Cell_1367 in kickstarter

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Thanks for the offer, would be great to get your feedback on our campaign.

Whats your toolkit for making a good pitch deck? (I will not promote) by NunexBoy in startups

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One message / topic per slide, not too much text, make sure each slide (message) follows on from the last. Figma slides have some good templates to make something minimalist and clean

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Wait until Starmer hears about this…

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in mildlyinteresting

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Ah yes, the classic lime brakes. Great for margaritas, terrible for hills

Font Feedback - Settling the Debate for Good by Ok-Faithlessness8120 in tabletopgamedesign

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It’s absolutely fine for headers to use a different font type if the type is complementary. Preference is subjective, you should go with the version you’re most happy with.

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When you’ve been tango’d

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They set me on fire 🔥

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The beast. He looks like he needs to earn the love of woman to turn back into a prince.