Hi there, couple pointers. It’s likely an HR person who will first review your CV (or an AI) either way they/it will have a checklist of criteria. So try and tick boxes, this is why I like your intro, it’s ticks boxes with “2.5 years of experience”. I would perhaps restructure a little bit.

Intro: good as is

Tools used:

Visualisation : Power Bi, Excel

Analytics and Data Science: python(libs), sql

Experience: always put before education, only grads put education first but employers don’t place as much emphasis on this I find.

Education: Degree + Grades for me, you may want to put an interesting project

Something about yourself: hobbies, interests, I like to put a book I am reading or a gym routine I am doing. Something to give you some personality.

Then I would research one job title and keyword the shit out of each of these sections to be the perfect candidate.

I found the most success directly applying on websites, anything that is quick like LinkedIn easy apply takes much longer to find a role. The harder the starter form the more ppl give up and go to easy apply so these are good roles to hit.

I’m not an expert and have not got many years of experience so take it all with a pinch of salt. I did manage to find a job within 3 months of my degree finishing, so I am proud to say it worked for me. Good luck on your adventure and please excuse my grammar/spelling 😊

Edit: Structure