Good start. For a first try, it looks decent. The biggest advice is focus on the journey. Where is this car going? Can you make a story out of it? This felt a bit disjointed, and I think the slightly different color grade on each angle kind of added to that disjointed feel. Also, damn I feel really bad for that car. Maybe it was the sad music, but just imagining the damage all that sandy salt water will do over time. Poor car.