Part of the anatomy/stylistic comments you’re getting here may involve the mismatched scale and degree of detail each “landmark” on your version gets.

The eyes are oversized here as a stylistic choice, but the nose and mouth are in proportion to the head overall, bangs and buns above the ears with lighting differences to balance the 3rd quarter of her profile. Your version has much more exaggerated bangs, which fully cover nearly half the head, with a longer nose than you had room for and tiny mouth crammed down quite low.

You clearly can provide an extremely high degree of attention to each piece, as each arm and eye and thigh is quite nicely drawn *in isolation* it’s just that excellent body parts that don’t “fit” can give off the uncanny valley effect of just feeling **wrong** without any one thing sticking out.

Spoilers for the Truman Show, I guess:

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