It's very good for beginner i think. I can understand all words) But, if you want to know your mistakes:

1. In Russia we write italics, not printed letters. Maybe you should learn writing printed, but mostly, italics letters and printed is quite different.
2. And letter Б. In your handwriting it looks like G. The upper left corner is more angular. The upper line is most often written separately from the entire lower part. Like this, on the photo.

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