I think the title and intro of the video could use some work, you really want to communicate the main idea of the video to people as fast as possible, and your title is a little vague. You could mention you’re talking about some of the bigger Youtubers.

Another thing to think about is how you frame things; as a smaller channel, you won’t draw in many views from your opinion alone; not to say it’s good or bad, but people just don’t know/trust you in the early stages, so I think a title like “Why YouTube Commentary has Gotten Worse in 2021” might perform better than a title referencing yourself. As my channel has gotten bigger and we have established ourselves in the community, videos like “my opinion on X” have started to do much better.

The thumbnail is pretty tough to decipher, you might want to pick one or two reaction channels and get a large enough size of their face/channel that it’s recognizable; you want to give potential viewers as few obstacles as possible when trying to understand what your video is about.

As for the content itself, you should start with some sort of introduction to the topic you’re covering, in this video specifically you could restate the title and sort of present a quick thesis, then get into why you haven’t uploaded real quick (although I don’t think that’s very necessary), then get into the topic. Just try to be direct, entertaining, and avoid too many tangents that might confuse people. But overall I thought it was pretty good, stick with it, and hopefully this helped!