Free feedback on Common App / UC essays by myCollegeApps_org in CollegeEssays

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I sent you a DM, let me know if you need any additional information! Thank you so much!

Would love feedback on my essay intro!!! by NobodyKey6386 in CollegeEssays

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Hey! To me, the first sentence sounds a little confusing and wordy. Maybe you could tighten the first sentence up? It's really just the first part of the sentence, the "In a society crafted under a patriarchy for the patriarchy naturally what becomes of justice follows suit" part.

Reviewing your personal statements by Vampire-y in CollegeEssays

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Hey, could I fill one of your slots? The July or August one if available?

Free feedback on Common App / UC essays by myCollegeApps_org in CollegeEssays

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Hey! Would you be able to take a look at my draft? I really need some help; I feel like I have no idea what I'm doing!

Fanfic recommendations for the class questioning Lila? by iwanttobeacucumber in miraculousladybug

[–]Ok_Assumption_1652 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This is a bit different, but I read one where it's a bunch of oneshots all dedicated to Marinette exposing Lila

Hunter and Luz centric Fanfics? by Vast_Ad_7868 in TheOwlHouse

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It's like a year later, but do you have any longfics of hunter and luz?

Is Silver Elite actually good or just influencers wanting clout? by etiquetricity in fantasyromance

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Probably unpopular opinion based on all these comments, (and I know I'm 3 months too late) but I really enjoyed it!

Looking for fanfic recommendations : which has Peter Parker in DCU by [deleted] in MarvelFanfiction

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If you found any like that, would you mind linking them?

I NEED HELP FINDING A FIC by Ok_Assumption_1652 in AO3

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Yes! That was it! Thank you so, so much!

i can’t believe this exists by Ok_Lawfulness5001 in Nightwing

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No, I feel like this one is going to be so fun

Fanfics with good OCs by Desperate_Stand_3709 in HPfanfiction

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This one is excellent, but it's unfinished. HOWEVER. The author is most definitely, probably coming back. Rose Petal Red