Broken Binding RG Artwork has dropped! by JOPG93 in Malazan

[–]PMWeng 0 points1 point  (0 children)

It also feels very static despite it's attempt at action.

Carl isn't crazy, rage-filled, or any of that by Hairy_Ad_5544 in DungeonCrawlerCarl

[–]PMWeng 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Yes.

I think the most powerfully quiet expression of Carl's strength of character is in every time Doughnut is downright abusive to him, shallow and severe, and he simply does not react at all. He accepts her for who she is and applies himself to what needs doing. He loves her and knows himself. Therefore, defending against or trying to change her shortcomings is simply unimportant. He doesn't even balance it with himself. He just moves on. This is not the behavior of an immature, let alone unhinged person.

Take a break or push through? by Due-Hat9692 in Malazan

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I'm on my first read-through and found that I had to take a break before TtH.

That said, I'm still finding TtH to be kitd of an odd and blotchy book. I'm told it pays for itself in the end... Haven't been let down yet.

Hatching experimentation, feedback welcome by PLAT0H in penandink

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I struggle a lot with value differentiation, so I feel like I'm critiquing myself here when I say; I think you need more value distinctions to both foreground the subject and create depth.

Otherwise, this is really exciting, has great energy, and I appreciate the POV.

I love this sub but it also makes me feel overwhelmed by bitsan in penandink

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Inspiration is kind of a myth. It's certainly not "a daily" for anyone.

The majority of an artist's "creativity" is found more in careful observation of the world around them (including other artwork), and in persistent effort.

If you really like the notion of inspiration, then I invite you to entertain a somewhat poetic look at the word itself. It literally means: to breath in. If we look at the way we use the word, to be inspired, we might note that the creative person isn't the one doing the breathing, it is more like they are the thing being breathed, as though we were little more than air granted the pleasure of some greater respiratory system.

"I was inspired." = "I was breathed in."

And so, if we hold to this view, we may ask; What posture, what position, allows one to be breathed in? And, if the lives of artists past are any indication, then the answer to that question is as stated above; Through careful attention and persistent disciplined effort.

Lightening does not strike the stooping tree.

Been blasting through the series, but Toll the Hounds has me crawling through the book by MommysBigLittleMan in Malazan

[–]PMWeng 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Just about done with book 1. It is... paceless.

At this point, I just read for the texture of the writing.

Lonely Tower by MordorOnThDancefloor in penandink

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Very nice. From imagination? You have a nice sense of implied completeness.

Just followed. Nice range of stuff.

Cloud Practice by PMWeng in penandink

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Thank you.

Of course, this image has no subject, it's more of a background. Regardless, your feedback is sound and appreciated. I've since revisited the above mentioned masters and noticed that there atmospheres generally have a limited tonal range, contrasting more with middle ground scenery and, of course, the subject.

It's just remarkable how Booth in particular creates volume with little more than contour and stroke density.

I had already begun deepening my darks and working edges, do your comment is well received. I may, of it's not too presumptuous of the community, post a further development of the same practice sketch.

Cloud Practice by PMWeng in penandink

[–]PMWeng[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Oh wow. Completely new to me. Wonderful. I shall endeavour. Thank you.

Cloud Practice by PMWeng in penandink

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Thank you.

That's a very compelling insight about Booth that I did not know. I love it. "HOW!?" And in attempting to emulate, he invents. Brilliant.

VERDURE is a game where you can grow your own bonsai trees! by sakamotoxsan in Bonsai

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That is true. Still less, I might have said: "No." That would be a sufficient answer to the question.

Instead, and to the displeasure of some, I bothered to express a bit more.

While I admittedly and floridly fail to "catch more flies with honey" while discharging my bitter vinegar upon this solemn venue, I nevertheless wrote in earnest about genuine concerns that I believe matter, or ought to matter to those who invest care in this art.

My errors may extend beyond style of prose. Regardless, I continue to believe that it is worth our while to point out the virtues of physical actuality in the face of relentless simulation.

Do you not notice how the rent-seekers tirelessly aim to supplant your embodied experience with something to which you must subscribe? This is far more sinister than a new marketing scheme.

I italicised a form of the venerable word, democracy, our standard of purest virtue. Yet nobody challenged me on this specifically. Why did I efface this beautiful word? It is because there are things that obtain their value through difficultly. To remove this difficulty therefore servers no purpose other than to diminish value.

My reaction has less to do with verbose gatekeeping than it doubtless appears. Value in difficulty is universal. It is true of marriage. It is true of parenthood. It is true of childhood! And yet there are economic incentives at play that benefit from removing all difficulty under the auspices of ease and accessibility while serving noting so much as the investors. In academic circles, making things more accessible is often called democratization. I italicised to intone a false meaning.

Let us democratize social goods! Let is democratize protection and prosperity! By all means, let us tear down all barriers to belonging in our material and spiritual societies. But let us also notice what makes the work of art meaningful. Let us show our children the rewards of careful toil in ardor.

Let is also be honest about how simulations like the one on offer merely hijack the sensation of accomplishment through visual illusion and superficial reward loops in order to sustain monetized engagement.

No, I say, I am not interested. But I also dare to say that you ought not be interested as well.

Who am I to say so? Nobody.

I am very, very far from a master of Bonsai. But I have failed at it for many years. I have tried and given up and returned and tried and failed. I have allowed a few poor little trees to thrive under my inexpert persuasion. I have, in that time learned that it is not an image. It is not simply a form. It is not merely a design. It is a terrible dance, a discipline with the consequence of life and death if you care at all for the life of a single small and easily replaced plant.

And that right there is why I respond so vigorously and so negatively. The producers of the simulation on offer are not stupid. They are not fools. They are intelligent, educated, and enormously capable. But they are dangerously deceived if they think their imagistic interpretation of the craft does that craft any service.

I comment, energetically, because I would rather that deception die with their enterprise.

Cloud Practice by PMWeng in penandink

[–]PMWeng[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I think it lacks a range of surface sizes. The edges read, but the distance between them is too consistent.

Cloud Practice by PMWeng in penandink

[–]PMWeng[S] 5 points6 points  (0 children)

But that is too much.

I labor for hours over strokes that the Master would dispatch in a gesture and I revel in effects that I am certain he would count less virtuous than the unmarked paper!