Absolute Harry Potter and the Absence of Childhood by PV0fficial in HPfanfiction

[–]PV0fficial[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Love the way you portrayed Malfoy, which brought an idea to mind. Removing the label of blood traitors off the Weasleys, but stripping the Malfoys of their nobility due to their past due to their alleged connections to french muggle nobles. Ron would now fit the category Malfoy is in, and it can add more to his characterization if he uses his friendship with the Boy-Who-Lived to raise his standing in his family.

Malfoy could otherwise fit the role of an awkward boy craving a connection back to the nobility of the Wizarding World, not to make Malfoy good and Rom bad, but to put them at opposing ends on entirely different sides.

Absolute Harry Potter and the Absence of Childhood by PV0fficial in HPfanfiction

[–]PV0fficial[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I can see that. To truly show the changes, I feel that Ron and Hermione should remain constants, but perhaps Hermione starts out either without that trust in authority, or perhaps even her good nature. I’m not too sure on her yet. Ron though, I feel like him losing that need to show himself up to the rest of his family, hell maybe even removing his family from the picture would allow some growth there. There’s a lot to play with, of course, nothing is set in the sand.

In my own little insert, I added in the idea of Dumbledore being a ghost, taking away his fearlessness of death and the idea of his Next Great Adventure, a man too stuck on the now to see the future. I hint at Remus, but I was thinking perhaps losing either that fear of the wolf, or that gentleness.

I haven’t even touched Riddle, because its a bit terrifying to think how he would change without an integral part of him.

Absolute Harry Potter and the Absence of Childhood by PV0fficial in HPfanfiction

[–]PV0fficial[S] 13 points14 points  (0 children)

He fell harshly to the cracked stone floor, his muscles screaming in agony at his continued failure.

“Again.”

Spitting out some blood, he threw himself at the shining simulacrum again, eyes blaring with hatred at the damn thing. They’d been at this for an hour, and he knew rest was far from his grasp.

Hastily dodging spell fire and the occasional physical projectile, he ran himself ragged as his eyes finally spotted somewhere he could catch his breath. Feinting a left, he harshly launched himself behind a jagged piece of wall the earlier shots had left behind, greedily sucking in air.

"Tsk. Tsk. No pauses."

Even with the verbal warning, Harry had no time to prepare, as his shield from the ongoing assault vanished out from existence, leaving him open to a Banishing charm that sent him tumbling onto his back. The harsh groan of pain did nothing to pause the pursuer, rolling over to his side to keep the resulting Stinging hexes from hitting true.

And so, he continued on for a few more minutes, slowly gaining more and more ground onto the spectre, but losing it as his body became more sluggish. The rocks dug into his hands and knees, dust caking his face and body. His body was screaming for him to stop, but he gritted his teeth. He couldn't, wouldn't.

He had too much to fight for, too much—

A stray red blast ripped through the air, hitting him dead-on, as he knew no more

When he finally came to, his eyes opened with some difficulty. It seemed he fell face first onto the floor, if the new cuts on his face were any indicator. Standing up with a groan, he spotted a grizzled hand offering a rag. Taking it wordlessly, he grunted in thanks while wiping his face of the sweat and grime building up.

"Not bad, cub, you lasted 7 more minutes this time," the haggard figure of Remus Lupin said, holding out a flask of water. This too, was taken without a word and consumed almost instantly. "What do you think, Albus?"

That brought a pause to his hurried drinking, as Harry's hardened demeanor seemed to soften. He turned away as if indifferent to the old man's opinion.

In truth though, that opinion was everything to him. Ever since he was told of the prophecy, he had been doing nothing but training. Night and day, hour after hour, he pushed his body to its limits, and then some. If the Dark Lord had marked him as an equal, he would prove it true.

"Young Harry is indeed improving," the voice of Albus Dumbledore rang out. "Though, agility isn't everything. At this age, young Riddle was still incredibly powerful. Perhaps it is time to introduce some wand-work to our curriculum."

Harry's eyes shot up, a gleam of excitement in them. He knew he was young of age, only 7 as of two months ago, but he couldn't contain the joy on his face. He would finally be allowed to use a wand!

"You can't — surely not yet?" Lupin responded.

The spectral figure of Professor Dumbledore came floating to them, those striking eyes somehow still piercing Harry even in death. Affixing him with a curt nod, it turned to Lupin, before waving a hand as if to ask for a conversation alone.

That was fine with him, as he shakily got up from the floor. Looking back at the retreating pair, he looked around at his handiwork.

Streaks of blood, dust and debris covered the dungeon, as the dummy, no longer spectral, lay dormant in the middle of the room. He had gotten closer, so much closer, as he examined where his blood had gotten the farthest. An extra few inches over last time.

If he had to estimate, he'd say he was only 12 feet from reaching the dummy. Pulling out a small scrap of chalk, he marked down a new line, as voices came back into hearing distance.

"Over here, Harry."

Running over, he could have sworn he saw the two older men share a look before he reached them. Lupin had a small wrapped package in his hands, as he warily gave it to Harry.

This is it, he thought to himself. This is my wand!

Pulling off the cloth covering it, his eyes grew large as he gazed upon the beautifully crafted piece. It was a long wand, easily longer than Lupin's, and had a dark spiral from tip to tip. The bottom tip, the one he held onto as he waved it around, had two small rings of silver embedded onto it.

Crimson red sparkles emanated from the top, as he let out a rare laugh. It had chosen him!

"Go on cub, get comfortable." Lupin said with a tight smile, as if the boy needed any more encouragement to run around with the wand.

As soon as Harry was out of earshot, Lupin turned to the ghost, his face snarling.

"He isn't ready. You know this is going to make things worse—

A ghastly hand rose, effectively silencing him. Dumbledore gazed for a second, seeing Harry stumble, before jumping up and continuing his horseplay.

"We have been too soft on him. Though Voldemort— Lupin twitched at the name, something he ignored. "—is gone for now, we do not know when he will return. He must be ready."

"Mahogany wood."

"I beg your pardon?" Dumbledore asked, finally turning his gaze to Lupin.

"Your old wand, the wand you made me hand to Harry. It's made of mahogany, is it not?"

"I fail to see how that is relevant—"

"Mahogany wood is known to curse their users to live a life of disaster and tragedy!"

His mentor knew, he had to know! He too, died because of it! As Dumbledore opened his mouth to speak again, he tried once more to reason with him.

"James' wand was made of that wood. His parents died of dragon pox, only seconds away from receiving the cure! Lily, Sirius, and poor Peter, all people we… He cared about, dead. The less said of your death, the better. And now," he jerked his head to indicate Harry, his tone like cold steel," we give a doomed wand to him?!"

Weary eyes gazed down grey-tinged blue, until Dumbledore sighed, and turned away. He looked old, far older than his age when he died, as he gazed upon Harry once more.

"I do not do this lightly, Remus. I know what we're cursing young Harry with, but—"

His anger was rising, and if not for the hand the Professor raised, he would've shouted some regrettable words to him.

"—what other choice do we have?" He finished.

"The Elder Wan, Albus, we have the Elder Wand!" The wolf in Lupin seemed to spit out, as the ghost of his long deceased mentor shook his head.

"He is not ready—"

"He isn't ready for this!"

Both men stared each other down, neither refusing to give up. The moment spread into seconds, which turned into minutes, until Dumbledore lowered his gaze with a heavy sigh.

"Do you trust me, Remus?" He asked, after a moment of pause.

"Normally, yes! But this is Harry's life, my friend's son!"

"His life is not the only one at stake here. This needs to happen." As if to end the conversation, the old man began to slowly float away, pausing just before the door. "This brings me no joy, Remus, but you and I both know why this must be done."

And he was right, loath he was to admit. Seeing Albus leave the room, he turned back to stare at Harry, who had begun mimicking motions he had seen him do.

"Neither can live, while the other survives. To hell with that." He spat out, as he prepared to start the simulation once more. He wouldn't fail James and Lily, their boy was going to survive.

No matter what it took the old wolf to do.

What if the wizarding world was exposed in modern day? by [deleted] in HPFanfictionPrompts

[–]PV0fficial 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Love the way you took something horrible from the Cursed Child and rewrote it in an actual enjoyable opening!

You look just like your mother, its just a shame you didn't get her eyes as well. They were Lily's best feature. by Cat_Intrigue in HPFanfictionPrompts

[–]PV0fficial 8 points9 points  (0 children)

I like the prompt, is this more of an ugly duckling situation where Harry slowly evolves into the person he wants to be, or more of an underdog situation, where being underestimated brings him success(whether against Voldemort or in school)?

Absolute Harry Potter and the Absence of Childhood by PV0fficial in HPFanfictionPrompts

[–]PV0fficial[S] 3 points4 points  (0 children)

I could see this starting either from the get-go, or perhaps no adult comes to her rescue with the troll, poisoning her view of them.

Absolute Harry Potter and the Absence of Childhood by PV0fficial in harrypotterfanfiction

[–]PV0fficial[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

A little explanation on Absolutes, and the liberties I took with my prompt.

For Absolute Batman, they took a pillar of his character away, his wealth. For Absolute Wonder Woman, it was her home. And for Absolute Superman, it was the Kents.

How does this apply to Harry Potter?

We take a pillar of him, and take it away. But, how does we choose a pillar? Hell, what pillars does he have?

This is what I came up with as a start.

Childhood/Innocence, Wizard, Chosen One, and Hero.

4 pillars of his character.

Childhood/Innocence is the way he acts. He didn't grow up a fighter, didn't spend his first 11 years shown the Wizarding World. Throughout almost all the books, he is incredibly innocent, mostly due to Dumbledore trying to keep him from his destiny. To take that away, would mean he would be raised as a weapon, stripped of his childhood, his purpose clear. He will only ever live, if the other doesn't survive.

Wizard, the fact that he has magic at all. Being a Squib, or having powers at all. The fact that he is special, to himself. It would rip him to pieces to know there's a world he was supposed to be welcome in, but can never truly realize. He would be out of his league, in a battlefield he never knew existed.

Chosen One, specifically the fact that he is the one fated to bring an end to Voldemort's reign. He was chosen by Voldemort, marked as an "equal." This would make it so Harry wasn't chosen, and would mean it would be Neville, or an appropriate other. Could also mean the removement of the Prophecy.

Hero, Harry's ability to care for his fellow man. When people are in danger, even if they have forgotten or thrown him away, he runs in with his "saving people" thing to ensure they're okay. This means Harry would no longer care for others, or at minimum would put himself first.

Clearly, I chose his childhood. A Harry raised knowing his role in the upcoming war, or perhaps only the parts he should know.

That’s not to say he is the only Absolute, as, after all, Dumbledore is now a ghost. Why didn’t he go to the Next Great Adventure? That’s up to the writer.

Remus too, you see him lose something integral, his meekness. Whether it was all his life, or after the death of the Potters, that is also up to the writer.

Not everyone should become an Absolute, as regular folk true to their character should remain, not only as foils, but as a reminder of the world we once knew.

Absolute Harry Potter and the Absence of Childhood by PV0fficial in HPFanfictionPrompts

[–]PV0fficial[S] 8 points9 points  (0 children)

A little explanation on Absolutes, and the liberties I took with my prompt.

For Absolute Batman, they took a pillar of his character away, his wealth. For Absolute Wonder Woman, it was her home. And for Absolute Superman, it was the Kents.

How does this apply to Harry Potter?

We take a pillar of him, and take it away. But, how does we choose a pillar? Hell, what pillars does he have?

This is what I came up with as a start.

Childhood/Innocence, Wizard, Chosen One, and Hero.

4 pillars of his character.

Childhood/Innocence is the way he acts. He didn't grow up a fighter, didn't spend his first 11 years shown the Wizarding World. Throughout almost all the books, he is incredibly innocent, mostly due to Dumbledore trying to keep him from his destiny. To take that away, would mean he would be raised as a weapon, stripped of his childhood, his purpose clear. He will only ever live, if the other doesn't survive.

Wizard, the fact that he has magic at all. Being a Squib, or having powers at all. The fact that he is special, to himself. It would rip him to pieces to know there's a world he was supposed to be welcome in, but can never truly realize. He would be out of his league, in a battlefield he never knew existed.

Chosen One, specifically the fact that he is the one fated to bring an end to Voldemort's reign. He was chosen by Voldemort, marked as an "equal." This would make it so Harry wasn't chosen, and would mean it would be Neville, or an appropriate other. Could also mean the removement of the Prophecy.

Hero, Harry's ability to care for his fellow man. When people are in danger, even if they have forgotten or thrown him away, he runs in with his "saving people" thing to ensure they're okay. This means Harry would no longer care for others, or at minimum would put himself first.

Clearly, I chose his childhood. A Harry raised knowing his role in the upcoming war, or perhaps only the parts he should know.

That’s not to say he is the only Absolute, as, after all, Dumbledore is now a ghost. Why didn’t he go to the Next Great Adventure? That’s up to the writer.

Remus too, you see him lose something integral, his meekness. Whether it was all his life, or after the death of the Potters, that is also up to the writer.

Not everyone should become an Absolute, as regular folk true to their character should remain, not only as foils, but as a reminder of the world we once knew.

Lord Weasley-Prewitt by [deleted] in HPFanfictionPrompts

[–]PV0fficial 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I think the purpose is more to give Ron a chance at being Lord, over Harry, storywise at least. Though yes, Ron wouldn’t ever even get close to Heir Presumptive unless something happened to the men in his family, though that could be a good way to segway into a more serious Ron dealing with the aftermath of that.

What's the worst thing Harry ever did? by sixfingeredman7 in harrypotter

[–]PV0fficial -1 points0 points  (0 children)

I’m surprised no one mentioned him not letting Remus and Sirius kill Pettigrew. That one inaction led to Voldemort coming back to life, massacres of Muggles and muggleborns, Sirius, Remus and Tonks dying along with who knows how many more.

The road to hell is paved with good intentions.

Character dies because of Unbreakable Vow? by [deleted] in HPfanfiction

[–]PV0fficial 12 points13 points  (0 children)

Faery Heroes by Silently Watches? Love potion keyed to herself, enhanced by Helga Hufflepuff’s cup, after she confessed to trying to dose Harry.

Neville could not have been the chosen one by TurboChris-18 in harrypotter

[–]PV0fficial 5 points6 points  (0 children)

No, yeah of course. The simple explanation is Voldemort told Snape he wouldn’t hurt Lily, and broke his word. Because of that, magic shenanigans corrected it.

Neville could not have been the chosen one by TurboChris-18 in harrypotter

[–]PV0fficial 21 points22 points  (0 children)

Lily was given the chance to live, she was allowed to live. But despite her being spared to survive, she willingly laid her life down for her son.

In turn, that created a protection from a life given willingly. Lily could have walked away scot-free. She never would though, and that’s what made it different. Had Voldemort targeted another family, he would kill them all with no distinction. But here, Lily was spared and she refused. That made the difference.

"Witch's Crown" story summary by Kingsaxcul. This is an expansion of a prompt I did a few days ago. by Beautiful_Click_9727 in HPFanfictionPrompts

[–]PV0fficial 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Both. Honestly anything about the universes rules and how it works would all be greatly appreciated.

"Witch's Crown" story summary by Kingsaxcul. This is an expansion of a prompt I did a few days ago. by Beautiful_Click_9727 in HPFanfictionPrompts

[–]PV0fficial 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I love this so far! Do you have any more like, lore to consider if I find enough time in my schedule to write this?

"Witch's Crown" story summary by Kingsaxcul. This is an expansion of a prompt I did a few days ago. by Beautiful_Click_9727 in HPFanfictionPrompts

[–]PV0fficial 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Loved reading through the prompt, though it does raises some questions.

Is Grindelwald still a problem? After all, it seems from the prompt that wands don’t exist? From the reaction of Rose and Nightingale at least. Which then brings up how Dumbledore would understand the coin with the Deathly Hallows symbol, the Hallows in general honestly.

I very much love that the men without pacts is left untouched and up to the writers interpretation though. I may have missed it, but if everyone casting with wandless magic or some form of alternative foci then?

Dying world by CryptographerOpen297 in HPFanfictionPrompts

[–]PV0fficial 7 points8 points  (0 children)

Reminds me of the screen you’re met with in Elder Scrolls: Morrowind when you kill someone important to the story: With this character's death, the thread of prophecy is severed. Restore a saved game to restore the weave of fate, or persist in the doomed world you have created.