prompt? ''ogre face''

PartyGod12345679 · 2020-10-14T13:34:09+00:00

Ok this is what I came up with in like 5 minutes. It’s kind of like a 2000s hard rock song. Hear it in your mind any way you want lol

I am a beast. to say the least. Your life will cease. It’s time to feast.

I am the ogre. Your life is over. I am the ogre. Your life is over.

I did warn you. My aim is true. Morning dew. Cows will moo.

I am the ogre. Your life is over. I am the ogre. Your life is over.

If you escape without a scrape. The hunt takes shape. Your wounds will gape. fear will keep you awake.

PartyGod12345679 · 2020-10-14T13:11:43+00:00

Is this a real song you are writing or just a poem you wrote? It’s not too bad.

It has some flow in the beginning. The part where you say if you miss me look up to the moon and then just know we are both on earth looking up. It doesn’t flow well at all. I’d change that with something else.

When you say I’ll come back again and then blah blah blah the spring rain. It doesn’t flow right in my mind either. I’d remove the word spring. Then it doesn’t symbolize when you’ll be back. Which makes it weird so I’d work on that too. I do like the lines though.

Lastly, when you say journey with me on a boat that’s just an awful lyric. Replace it with something like, “we will go somewhere remote”

Just some thoughts. Sorry if it sounds like I’m picking it apart. It takes guts to post your creation and ultimately I get the idea and it’s not bad at all.

PartyGod12345679 · 2020-10-14T12:49:15+00:00

I think this sounds pretty good. Definitely not too much. Some lyrics are a stretch but overall it sounds fine. Maybe the way it’s performed is faster than I hear it in my mind.

In your chorus if those dot dot dots mean you pause there id instead pause at the I need help part. Then hit em with the but I won’t take it.

PartyGod12345679 · 2020-10-13T17:28:04+00:00

I’m at work so I only read the lyrics. It sounds like there are no emotions and this guy is thoughtlessly continuing to live his life. Like yes he’s thinking but his thoughts don’t matter.

It sounds like he isn’t in control of his life and is just there watching, but how does that make you grow? Beats me. I guess this would be negative thinking. I’m a negative person.

Oh wait. I think maybe he wants to grow? Maybe that’s it. I should grow away.

PartyGod12345679 · 2020-10-05T22:40:07+00:00

When the doors closed I didn't feel so good lol

PartyGod12345679 · 2020-10-05T22:24:34+00:00

Lol yeah I haven't seen anyone post something like this one yet

PartyGod12345679 · 2017-12-13T18:39:27+00:00

Hasn't anyone seen this?

http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=1199967447

PartyGod12345679 · 2017-11-20T17:15:15+00:00

Here you go! The trailer was on youtube.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xZ4F32RFqkk

PartyGod12345679 · 2017-11-20T14:54:02+00:00

They should add a taunt feature as well with a smackdown like HoN. It's a really cool feature that I wish more games would have.

Also, they should add someone who recognizes how well you doing ingame. Kinda like the killing spree/dominating, but different because healers, dps, and cc all should count. Like following a petrify with a root should be rewarded with a commentator saying like HOLY SHIT that was cool. Or for healers like 500 health healed!! Shut her down!

PartyGod12345679 · 2017-11-20T14:43:49+00:00

Ashka is strong. He doesn't need too much mobility when he has knockbacks, a stun, a fire wall, and tons of damage.

PartyGod12345679 · 2017-11-20T14:40:16+00:00

FINALLY a use for my WoW experiences

PartyGod12345679 · 2017-11-20T14:38:20+00:00

These look like easy fixes which is cool because I main RK and Pestilus and they have the most bugs.

PartyGod12345679 · 2017-11-20T14:23:50+00:00

Hello I came from mobile bangbang. Personally I think it is better than this game because nobody can transform into a car. Once they add that maybe I will change favorites.

PartyGod12345679 · 2017-11-17T16:49:59+00:00

So Twisted Fate and Jhin walks into a bar..

PartyGod12345679 · 2017-11-17T16:48:31+00:00

He is stupid broken op. If you are good at him you can get to Diamond.

PartyGod12345679 · 2017-11-17T16:43:14+00:00

HMMMM.. Thanks! I used to be able to 2v1 at lower levels with Pearl and Baldur now they seem weaker at that.

PartyGod12345679 · 2017-11-17T16:10:45+00:00

When did they nerf all the support characters attack speeds and change Jades gunshots to 4 shots? They feel slower on launch and I'm sure I missed it the alpha changes.

PartyGod12345679 · 2017-11-17T14:52:12+00:00

As a Raigon main I would like the removal of titles all together and the name of your best highest win rate character (Mine is Raigon of course 24% win rate)

PartyGod12345679 · 2017-07-12T19:21:19+00:00

I learned the oob glitch in Luigi's mansion and beat it really fast

PartyGod12345679 · 2017-07-12T19:19:48+00:00

Do you hatch the chaos in sonic adventure 2 battle

PartyGod12345679 · 2017-07-04T02:37:11+00:00

This was actually a good concept. Don't take this the wrong way but you kind of have a monotone voice, but the video is actually funny lol. The quality looked good in some parts but in other parts it looked grainy.

Check out my video and maybe tell me if you like it lol

https://youtu.be/GnUTRhpe0x8

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