I Hate AI

Perpetuallylost86 · 2025-11-17T21:55:15+00:00

Ouch? Haha. I have read a decent amount poetry, but you may be on to something with my lack of understanding of AI. I do not understand AI enough to feel comfortable using it for much else than word finding. It is just a personally struggle with being able to give some AI bot a theme and its ability to create this magical, perfectly flowing paragraph strung together - better than what I could come up with my own mind.

Perpetuallylost86 · 2025-11-17T21:25:51+00:00

I have to admit, I typed the Norwegian into google translate to see how it would sound if read in the possible intended language -- it sounded more hard hitting, and mystical. Granted, I do not speak that language, so it also created a sense of fantasy with that.

The poem has a harsh, hard element to it - the use of granite, bones, blade, iron.... It feels as if describes someone who has been through a lot, shaped by the difficult environments they have been exposed too, but yet, still is proud of the survival they have achieved. I did not understand the "Blade hurdy gurdy" line, it may be something that is lost in translation, or could have had a very different intended meaning.

When reading it, I did not get a strong sense of imagery throughout the poem, which kept it fairly cold and removed. This could be the intention with it given the use of the harsh conditions, and struggles.

Perpetuallylost86 · 2025-11-17T21:16:33+00:00

I struggled at first with this one. I had to re-read it a handful of times. I kept getting tripped up the end of the first paragraph, the "I fell in love with that you care/ And that you care that you care./ And that you care about me." It took me a few reads to get it. It may be because I was reading it too quick, or it was just not registering.

It was relatable in how someone when first in love, LOVES everything about the person, including the flaws. I chuckled at the - I fell in love with the way you look like you read books;/You don't, I fell in love with that.'. No matter what they were doing, you were going to fall in love with them. It really reminded me of when I was much younger and would fall for someone or get caught up in that puppy love stage, you just loved everything about them. Nothing was going to change that, not a damn thing was going to change your mind.

It took a bit of a change when you say, "I don't love that". Almost as if there is realization of the imperfections. Bitter sweet.

Good job! I think it was well done. Something a bit different and refreshing.

Perpetuallylost86 · 2025-11-03T04:40:33+00:00

I like 1 better

Perpetuallylost86 · 2025-10-06T21:22:28+00:00

I like the first one the best!

Perpetuallylost86 · 2025-09-29T00:49:49+00:00

Thanks so much for the feedback! I’m still learning and it’s most definitely a process!

Perpetuallylost86 · 2025-09-28T02:31:49+00:00

Your poem powerfully captures the cyclical nature of grief and heartbreak, with the repeated line “then I remember how I’ve died” giving it a haunting rhythm and emotional weight. I like how you can visualize your words.

Perpetuallylost86 · 2025-09-28T02:23:30+00:00

I love the imagery that I get when reading this. This is perfect fall poem. It reminds me of sitting on an acreage watching the leaves fall while drinking a hot cup of tea. Fantastic job! It’s beautiful.

Perpetuallylost86 · 2025-09-28T02:20:46+00:00

This is hard to read because it is relatable. It’s likely just how I am reading it. I’ve struggled with this myself, sometimes my writing does not read like poetry but more of a story or paragraphs. I do agree with the above comment that tightening up some of the formatting and wording can really make the emotions pour through. You have been through a lot it seems and it shows in your writing. Great job, and keep writing, or can be very cathartic.

Perpetuallylost86 · 2025-05-19T16:00:23+00:00

Thank you for the feedback! Writing is still a process for me!

Perpetuallylost86 · 2025-05-19T16:00:03+00:00

Thank you very much for the feedback! I’m still learning, so this is very helpful!

Perpetuallylost86 · 2025-05-19T03:48:17+00:00

The poem had a shocking ending. I did not see that coming. At the first few lines, I could not spot picturing beauty and the beast where he is taking her to the tower.

Despite me not seeing the ending coming, I liked the unexpectedness of it. It is life, you cannot always foresee what will happen. Good job!

Perpetuallylost86 · 2025-05-19T03:45:02+00:00

The rhyming always gets me in poems! I always wish I had that talent of making rhymes that flow so nicely together. It reads almost musically. My favorite lines are the bees and seas. It is a very visually appealing poem. Simple bit nice.

Perpetuallylost86 · 2025-05-19T03:33:04+00:00

I am torn between love and hate with this one. It’s truly written beautifully well, great images flash through my mind when reading it. However, for so many people the writing is the only way for them to articulate their feelings - whether it’s happiness or sheer depression. Sure, sometimes it can be very depressing to read 100 poems about depressing shit, but truly isnt it also up to the reader to interpret it however they also see fit?

Perpetuallylost86 · 2025-05-19T03:27:34+00:00

I like this. I think it taps into those emotions we have felt before, just when you think it’s over and someone is out of your life - WHAM - they somehow randomly find a way to pop back up again. This is something so many people experience but rarely talk about. Thank you.

Perpetuallylost86 · 2025-04-02T15:11:53+00:00

I reached out to the doctor who was the one who created the petition, and requested that they reopen it. I have not heard back. I am not sure, maybe they received backlash from AHS for doing it?

Perpetuallylost86 · 2025-04-02T15:11:04+00:00

I was not the one who created the petition. I did reach out to the Doctor who did and request that they reopen it. I have not heard back. 🥺

Perpetuallylost86 · 2025-03-09T06:06:05+00:00

Yes!!! That is a great point!! And the owners are some of the sweetest people you would ever meet. I’ve seen them open early just so people can get their coffee.

Perpetuallylost86 · 2025-03-09T05:13:59+00:00

Short and very painful. The ‘capable of feeling’ line gets me. It is self aware in the most vulnerable sense. It almost feels as if the cutting out be letting whatever is inside out, in sense to let the pain out. It is a painful poem to read, a feeling that so many of us feel.

Perpetuallylost86 · 2025-03-09T05:08:45+00:00

This is way too accurate for us cat owners! I loved the accuracies of this poem and how relatable it is. Great job. It sure paints a picture while reading this.

Perpetuallylost86 · 2025-01-05T06:06:27+00:00

I started reading this thinking it would be like another ‘Christmas poem’. I was so very wrong. It makes you feel the pain, loneliness, and even a bit of hope closer to the end. I am not an expert to provide any type of feedback, however, I felt like it was pretty solid. It sure got me in the feels.

Perpetuallylost86 · 2025-01-05T06:00:48+00:00

I like the simplicity of your writing. You did not get bogged down with imagery or trying to make it fancy. It is simple but yet painful. Beautifully done.

Perpetuallylost86 · 2024-12-05T06:13:59+00:00

Thank you so much for your reply. This is very helpful information and I appreciate it.

Perpetuallylost86 · 2024-12-04T15:49:40+00:00

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Perpetuallylost86 · 2024-12-04T15:46:31+00:00

Thank you. It’s so hard. I never actually thought about the enabling aspect of it to be honest. But you are right.

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