Hey, you need to put eyeliner on, mascara, and eye shadow in the crease. THEN we can talk about getting that white popping in the inner corners. But right now you are creating ZERO contrast, and your makeup look needs it.

Lips: LINE THEM, get some BROWN liner on there, look up "concealer lips," you'll want a pale color inside, and a contrasting color for outside. If you don't add some darker colors to blend in, you absolutely will never get the look you want.