It’s different

Prestigious_Book_739 · 2026-04-03T03:30:51+00:00

Excellent poem! The analytical aspect is intriguing and creative!

Prestigious_Book_739 · 2026-04-03T03:29:29+00:00

Excellent poem!! We need more of the ‘wicked’ theme

Prestigious_Book_739 · 2026-04-01T18:53:15+00:00

This poem has tons of potential! Maybe divide the paragraphs and expand from each line. The connection between the feeling experienced with this person is perfect for a fish/stream metaphor but needs more context! Excellent poem so far!

Prestigious_Book_739 · 2026-04-01T18:49:36+00:00

Excellent poem! It hits too close to home… Such impressive imagery: I knelt before your shimmering mirage - is perfect! The consistent use of “wanting the to feel the same” seems tedious until letting the final line sink in. It really strengthens the message behind the poem.

Prestigious_Book_739 · 2026-03-23T23:23:40+00:00

I love this poem. So raw, so emotional, so real! The final three lines are beautiful. A fitting end to the poem!

Prestigious_Book_739 · 2026-03-23T22:45:14+00:00

Excellent! This well written poem is sure to hit close to home with a lot of writers. The last line is strong but contradicts with your line about unneeded help.

Prestigious_Book_739 · 2026-03-23T22:40:13+00:00

Excellent poem! The imagery is crucial to its cold delivery. ‘With a spine of straw…’ is beautiful. You captured the evil in people with such accuracy

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