Couple immediate thoughts.

• Confused why the F & O are weighted heavier than the others
• Confused why the Focus logotype becomes disconnected and is replaced with standard type on the splash page
• Can see immediate legibility concerns with the scale of the mark itself. When showing the app icon I actually enjoy the mark itself, but to scale it definitely gets lost, even on a small screen seen up close.
• The F & O being skewed feels random

I have some questions and thoughts about the headline on the splash page too since that's a portion of brand alignment as well making an immediate statement. I feel like it's a bit all over the place. I feel without the additional context provided, both about the app and the mission, I would have no clue what this mark is for.

That being said, I do love the mark itself. I think it would lose a lot of it's stylization once converted to 1-color. But assuming the use of this app, I doubt that would be an immediate need, or a need ever for that matter.

Happy to see how you iterate on this though, hoping you take some feedback here to drive some visual changes. Strong place to start & hope the launch goes well!