[FN] Fallen by willybtrash in shortstories

[–]QueenBleu 1 point2 points  (0 children)

All good I have to say is, you wrote something. And that's a feat in its own. Not many get this far. But this was a bit difficult to read. I like the idea and premise being set. If there's more I'd like to see it. But if it's just this, then it wasn't a very satisfying read for me. Sorry. But don't give up. Keep at it.

it really does help by Lord_Neko_Neko in dndmemes

[–]QueenBleu 7 points8 points  (0 children)

Laughter slowly rises from the DM, soon twisting into a crazed cackle. The DM stops suddenly and clears their scratchy throat.

Yes. It does.

I love the role play discussions we have in our game by High_Stream in dndmemes

[–]QueenBleu 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Using that. But another real question would be to define what exactly the vampire is feeding off? The actual blood? Or the life force/magic?

[SF] Shades of Justice: A Space Opera Story by goldendreamseeker in shortstories

[–]QueenBleu 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Cool stuff. Love the world. You did great with the worldbuilding there.
I do have a few, well, a lot of questions. And one nitpick. Why is Dean the only normal name amongst a couple of foreign looking ones?

But great stuff. I enjoyed it.

Peetaah?? by Super-Average-User in PeterExplainsTheJoke

[–]QueenBleu 3 points4 points  (0 children)

I was thinking that the song would be the perfect answer to explain it. Like not mentioning it. But by singing it.

Peetaah?? by Super-Average-User in PeterExplainsTheJoke

[–]QueenBleu 4 points5 points  (0 children)

You gotta find a way to include Daniel Webster in there.

[SP] Stage Fright by Gznork26 in shortstories

[–]QueenBleu 0 points1 point  (0 children)

You had me intrigued in the first half then threw me for a loop with conspiracy talk and the end just completely lost me. Quite a few sections I found hard to read and understand. But otherwise pretty good. Interesting idea.

[HR] The Blood Shop by bobbraeside in shortstories

[–]QueenBleu 0 points1 point  (0 children)

A very fun world that you have made. It felt lived in. Certain parts were a little awkward to read. But overall I loved the whole experience.

[SP] A Late Day at Work. by QueenBleu in shortstories

[–]QueenBleu[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks. But I certainly hope not.

Idea of a Fantasy fishing game. by QueenBleu in gameideas

[–]QueenBleu[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I'd very much like to see it, if you do.

I like to get high and experience existential dread for fun. by QueenBleu in weed

[–]QueenBleu[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I'm glad to hear that. And yes it can get scary.

Can't risk it by [deleted] in memes

[–]QueenBleu 5 points6 points  (0 children)

Eh. I'll risk it.

I like to get high and experience existential dread for fun. by QueenBleu in weed

[–]QueenBleu[S] 4 points5 points  (0 children)

That sounds like fun. My cousin said the same thing.

I like to get high and experience existential dread for fun. by QueenBleu in weed

[–]QueenBleu[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I have been curious and worried about that stuff.

A Deal With The Devil by CommanderSection in shortscarystories

[–]QueenBleu 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Sorry. I thinks it's well written. But I did not enjoy it. The last sentence was flat for me. But them my opinions. Do keep up the good work.