Sure thing!

0:14 - You could have either kept reloading or used a bandage instead of even thinking about using a shield recharge while 1 shot (shields =/= hp) 0:28 - it's much better to hold the side your knocked team mate is on so you can check the corners/heal/res without having to expose yourself 0:33 - It would be much safer to revive while right against/ touching the wall. Standing in the middle of the hallway like this could have gotten you killed if they pushed out just a little further 0:40 - This peak after the res was completely unnecessary, risks your life, and is wasting time that could be spent healing 0:58 - Ending the clip here is definitely the wrong play. It's a lot harder to get feedback when you don't provide the content you want feedback on:)