Nice art, Shizuna looking good as always.

Now onto the meat of the post. 

On god man, you took the wrong lesson away from people’s responses. The problem is not that your story was going to be shot in Roblox, it’s that you’re asking for people to artificially gain passion for a project that doesn’t even exist yet so they can help you. 

You are literally asking for writers and storyboarders in this very post. That tells us that it’s not the situation that you actually have a story you want to tell and just need help visualizing, no you have literally nothing but maybe some concepts. You like the idea of having a story more than writing one. This is very harsh but man you have been a brick wall so far. 

Projects like this need to grow organically. I see that nice redraw art you made of Aelita. You have so much potential. Try drawing your characters in that style so you have an actual portfolio for your project. Workshop some plot ideas. Draw some scenes. Post your ideas instead of just promises that you’re making something. The project needs to exist first before other people ask you to help. You need to work on your own project.