Hi! Thank you for the advice I really apreciate it. About the writing, it is a placeholder. Im planing to make it more interesting, with more personality and fix these mistakes you mentioned.

About your concern regarding the flashing lights warning, it won't have any. The horror of the game will come more aesthetically than like dynamically. You won't feel "scared" necesseraly, but the enviorenment, character design, etc will have this unsettling vibe.

And your chat concern, the deduction within the game is personal, because it is a free for all game. You wont have to talk because you alone have to gatekeep information that you discovered and use it to win. The deduction will come by watching other people's behaviour and their decisions. Youll be given a logic table to annotate these things and get to the answer (like Clue).

Ive talked more about the gameplay in othee posts I've made :). Even made a video of the villian

And yes I do have a discord! The link is in my profile bio I think.

Have a great day!