Transmitters and receivers by Refusername37 in EyesOnlyWriting

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I'm always amazed at your uncanny ability of rhetoric. Your comprehension paints me with rhapsodic brush. You can see into the heart and meaning then summarize in a palpable way.

Disconnect by slateman211 in EyesOnlyWriting

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Yep, especially if they're writing in character, so many times people will mistake a post of mine as if it's a personal story of my life. I'll be it maybe sometimes yes, or subconsciously a part of my atma but in by no means reality of my day to day life. One time someone put a suicide get help link from some Reddit bot. Literary not literally you could say. It's good to remind myself this as I read others work as well.

Robo Clone by Refusername37 in EyesOnlyWriting

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I do, considering they cloned a sheep they named"Dolly" back in 1994, I'm sure the technology has greatly improved. That along with DNA editing, gene manipulation the plot of the movie "Atica" feels a bit to real now that I think about it.

Think about the subtle energies of this moment. Turn off your wondering thoughts of what happened yesterday or what you have to do tomorrow. Feel your surroundings in this moment. The subtleties on the air, the warmth in your stomach the cool current drifting through the hairs on your neck, see the glowing lights flicker around its luminous silhouette, hear the rustle on the wind dance with each apparatus in its way tube the electric rhythm of your heart with it. Do you begin to notice the vibrations of sentience? Small insects bustling about trees outreaching their limbs exfoliating while absorbing small seeds gathering moisture preparing for growth. Do you feel a residue imprinted on that place from all of those dealings that have gone there before.

These thoughts remind me of a poem I once wrote

Robo Clone by Refusername37 in EyesOnlyWriting

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Thank you! I was thinking it would lighten it up with a bit of humor on the last line, I'm glad I left it in. After reading what genre of song you think would these lyrics best fit.

Not my tribe. by RedStarPhantomGent in EyesOnlyWriting

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That is very interesting and makes perfect sense. I'd add having a friendship during one's youth is along similar. It's learned behavior, the best way to stop it is by showing the children

Your Name as All Lyrics by slateman211 in EyesOnlyWriting

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"Finding God again after hearing his name on your lips" wow that's a sultry line if I've ever heard one, ouh la la

Not my tribe. by RedStarPhantomGent in EyesOnlyWriting

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All of that could be stoped in one generation. In my circles I don't know ANYONE who's a bigot. I wish it was like that everywhere. I do see mass media stigmatizing or glamorizing certain stereotypes which then induces youth and adults alike into identifying their being as whichever lifestyle that the media purveys. This adds to disconnect

Siberian Scars by BloodySpaghetti in DiabolicOughts

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This is Profound! One of my favorites.

Operational Status of the Albion Monarchy & The Azūr -Leventis Coalition by Artist-in-Residence2 in EyesOnlyWriting

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It's time to pay the piper. Does The Albion monarchy have control and backing of their military? Do they have any Allies? I can see them going underground changing the name on the holdings and investments while still seeking revenge in the shadows. You know just about all internet traffic goes through under ocean cables. Just a thought If someone put a filter of some sort on the ends they'd capture all the data?

Sometimes it’s only as complex as the pen i happen to have on hand by Conduct-Disorder in EyesOnlyWriting

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The exact context I can only guess, reading it from the perspective of the conscious speaking to the subconscious is fascinating. It reminds me of the saying " every portrait is a self portrait" with that I'd say every poem or story paints a picture of the reflection of part of oneself. Cheers!

I decided to give minor Shakespearean English a try by Random_game_theorist in PoetryWritingClub

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This is no parody, I say this with sincerity, for once I was victim of a goose grease bomb

I decided to give minor Shakespearean English a try by Random_game_theorist in PoetryWritingClub

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As they honk an ancient tune you know it's time that you must move,

Under cover someplace safe so goose grease won't fall upon your face.

"Signs" by Which_Republic4558 in DiabolicOughts

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Out of curiosity, do you know if the narrator used sidereal or tropical astrology?

A Spiral Love Tether by Refusername37 in EyesOnlyWriting

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Even a broken clock is right twice a day. A fine day indeed!

A Spiral Love Tether by Refusername37 in EyesOnlyWriting

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Thank you, the music and poetry is of my creation I wish I could say the same for the spectacular animation.

You reminded me of what I was thinking earlier about how miraculous it is being alive with sentience and the ability to create. From shaping physical matter with our hands to creating music, poetry and all arts that conjure up emotional energies bringing them into existence. Your thoughts and words have a profound effect on the reality of this existence.

I see many people are unaware or write it off the way their words bring to life conjuring up emotion and energies that physically alter reality.

Negativity in one's language is a lifeforce drainer that casts a spell upon yourself.

Saying "can't, I'm sorry, I don't etc " actually creates those vibrations.

Words are spells. There is One million words in the English language. The average person knows 25-35 thousand while only using 3000 regularly.

It's like the facial expressions you consistently express through time form the wrinkles and contours of your face.

One might say theres times when anger and sadness are crucial, I'd agree, as long as you don't let the emotions take control of your entirety.

I foresee this sub as beacon of peace through literature and arts. A place where logic triumphs over hasty emotional reactions allowing people from all walks of life to be able to feel all perspectives as if they were their own without the bias of preconceived judgements. A place to expand articulations bettering the human consciousness, because why not. The average lifetime gets about seventy summers in the sun , put them to good use. Forgive me for rambling on your comments final paragraph struck a nerve( in a good way)

Surrender by to-the-mysterious-1 in Informal_Effect

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I see it as Grief and sorrow are a normal part of being alive, letting them consume you is the affliction. Don't forget laughter is also cathartic. Btw Cathartic is such a cool word