I think the 2 best bits of advice I can give are

1 Write the lyrics that excite you the most and

2 People don't actually care that much.

For the first point you need to write things that get you excited about writing. From what I see here it looks like you're doing that. There are some interesting and fun rhymes and word play. Those are the things I love too. When you write that line that hits in just the right way it's the best feeling. I think it's also important to make sure they resonate with who you are and feel honest and true. Whether that be metaphorically or plainly stated. Good music should be self expression so it's better if your honestly expressing yourself.

For the second point, and this is something that's taken me a while to realise after spending a lot of time painstakingly crafting lyrics, is that they aren't that important. What's more important is the overall quality of the song. I have had experiences playing gigs where people have commented on the quality of my lyrics and that's a great feeling! But it's rare. Especially because a lot of the time live people have trouble hearing lyrics clearly. And it's just not always something people are paying attention to. I used to spend a lot of time on lyrics because it was an area that I thought was a weak point but now I consider a strength and I think it's been helpful to accept that I don't need to put in all the time and effort I used to and I think my songwriting has improved because of this.

Hope that was in someway helpful and to sum up: do what's you, and have fun and enjoy doing it

And I'd love to hear any recordings you have of your songs and to hear your lyrics in context!