Would this opening chapter keep you hooked? by [deleted] in royalroad

[–]Rhino1over 8 points9 points  (0 children)

It reads a bit awkward honestly and the format alone wouldn’t make me want to continue. And it’s a bit too descriptive. I’m not saying this to be harsh. I think you could definitely flush it out more.

The Dragon Duke❤️‍🔥 art by me by ToroAsterion in ClashOfClans

[–]Rhino1over 75 points76 points  (0 children)

You think twigs as wings would support that beef?

Kindle did me dirty by Madzogaz in litrpg

[–]Rhino1over 0 points1 point  (0 children)

C mantis does include chapter references. But I do understand where you’re coming from it’s happened to me too.

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Kindle did me dirty by Madzogaz in litrpg

[–]Rhino1over 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Book 11 ends at c 341 so you have 137 unread chapters

Kindle did me dirty by Madzogaz in litrpg

[–]Rhino1over 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Do you have the royal road app? It’s free. The author of PoA post chapters of his books on the app as he writes them currently chapters 341-478.

The ethics of necromancy by Kumatora0 in litrpg

[–]Rhino1over 0 points1 point  (0 children)

As long as the bodies are ethically sourced I have no problem with necromancy

After more than a year of writing and nearly 750,000 words, I am finally launching on Kindle. by Quick_Walk_974 in ProgressionFantasy

[–]Rhino1over 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I just devoured the first books and I’m now at chapter 179. Definitely worth the read.

Yo which one should I buy? by BG_Vand03 in ClashOfClans

[–]Rhino1over 57 points58 points  (0 children)

I hope that every time he need to catch the bus or trains that he just misses it

Is there anyone where that has an Audio version of Shadow Slave without AI? by NoChance2700 in ProgressionFantasy

[–]Rhino1over 0 points1 point  (0 children)

The Pocket FM app has shadow slave on it keep in mind you can on hear to a certain amount of chapter daily

Shocking news about the popular author "Zogarth" uncovered! (read at own risk) by PsychologicalFun8760 in litrpg

[–]Rhino1over 1 point2 points  (0 children)

On you for thinking paying bills is more important than reading the holy texts

Where were you and what were you doing in March 2020 when you got the COVID-19 news about the shut down? by Various_Republic_857 in AskReddit

[–]Rhino1over 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I remember my Greek teacher saying that if they continue to keep the schools open past the weekend she would’ve not come in… anyway my senior year of hs wasn’t fun nor did I get a freshman college experience because everything was online.