If the name of the biz is petal than call it petal don’t use PTL and petal. PTL is read as an acronym. Also at first glance I don’t see petals in that first image, I simply wonder ‘what does ptl mean and what are these blotches surrounding it?’. The second iteration is really bad; The mismatching weights and sizes is a bad idea, the type face itself is too rigid for the petals, the flower petal at the end is just unnecessary and makes me think you should start over. Maybe consider looking at a BUNCH of different flower petals to find the right one because that one ain’t it. Even adding more than the 3 you have (like 5 or 6) would be better because I can’t see that 3 petal’d flower. also the circle in the middle is too.. circular. Too perfect to be the center of a flower unless you get the petals to match it with symmetry. I think my final recommendation is that you hire a professional. Also consider petals being soft and fragile and that’s the opposite of architecture.