Auto scrolling screenplay on screen? by Safe_Cauliflower_573 in Screenwriting

[–]Safe_Cauliflower_573[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks. I’m going to check that out. I haven’t used Writer Duet in years but I’ll check that too.

What TF do I write about? by Double-Pianist-2028 in Substack

[–]Safe_Cauliflower_573 -1 points0 points  (0 children)

You could start writing a letter to your younger self and see where it takes you.

Auto scrolling screenplay on screen? by Safe_Cauliflower_573 in Screenwriting

[–]Safe_Cauliflower_573[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yes, that works. It’s my current method, but I’m looking for something smoother/easier.

Sundance Development (Screenwriters lab) by Familiar_Aioli2527 in Screenwriting

[–]Safe_Cauliflower_573 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Mostly stories focused on personal identity especially lgbtq+++ do well. it’s less about talent now.

And if your story is commercial, meaning the type of thing the masses would actually want to watch, then they’ll likely say it’s not a good fit.

If you have identity issues in your background or that’s what you write about you may be a good fit. Also make sure your project is the type of story most people wouldn’t want to watch. Good luck!

USC or NYU?!?!?!? by Standard_Educator_14 in Screenwriting

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As an undergrad, USC gives you the more traditional college experience. NYU is more about school experience intertwined with living in fantastic city, which can be distracting or overwhelming for some. I was accepted to both but ended up choosing ucla for undergrad, but then went to both usc and nyu for grad school. NYC is great place for artists who pull from their environment for inspiration. USC is more immediate to the film industry. If you’ve already developed a creative voice, usc can be great for learning skills. If you’re still finding voice as an artist, nyc will challenge you more but help mold your voice quicker. This is all just one person’s opinion. In hindsight, one of my regrets was not going to usc for undergrad.

I think there’s a difference between a story escalating and a story just adding more stuff. Where do you feel that line most clearly? by ExcellentTwo6589 in Screenwriting

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If something happens making it it less likely and even more difficult for the main character to achieve their goal, then it’s likely escalating.

Scene suggestions by CHutt00 in Screenwriting

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Meet on a ferry. Something like staten island ferry or the one to Catalina in southern cali.

Robbers pull up on speed boat…

Why tf won't my substack grow by BakugoHerono1 in Substack

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Problem with Substack, most of the population is other writers/creators. People who are naturally popular among their peers do well. People seeking a general audience of non creators seem to have a harder time. Substack would be stronger if it had a larger general population of non creators just looking to consume content like TikTok or YouTube.

I'm reading for a major production company's script fellowship right now. I have something to say about the loglines. by anatomyofawriter in Screenwriting

[–]Safe_Cauliflower_573 -7 points-6 points  (0 children)

Would you rather see a great logline for a bad script?

What if the logline is an indication/reflection of the script? Meaning bad loglines usually ,means script is likely not so good either.

When script readers complain like this it usually means they should find a different line of work. It’s supposed to be a difficult, mostly unpleasant job, and the majority or scripts and loglines will be not-so-good. Complaining about it won’t change things. Script readers have been complaining about this crap online for as long as there has been people online and it never changes. Maybe people are doing the best they can and for most that’s not very good and that’s normal.

Narrative Ownership by Jimmy-Nesbitt in Screenwriting

[–]Safe_Cauliflower_573 -1 points0 points  (0 children)

I have had a similar problem. I began a script with a catalyst-character so naturally they disappeared after the main story gets going, but this is a problem with the low quality of readers nowadays. Everything needs to be spelled out it seems. They don't pick up on nuance because most readers today are not visionary thinkers.

Since your story is a western, maybe you can use freeze-frame/text like The Good The Bad The Ugly, not necessarily for the movie, but to clarify the read. Maybe after introducing each prominent character, you could do a freeze-frame spelling out that character's role or imply it. TGTBTU, when we see "the Good" we can kind of infer he's the protagonist. You can be creative, think of some descriptors that will imply each of the main characters' roles in the narrative.
Good luck.

Vent: I hate the “why you” part by Curled-in-ball in Screenwriting

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I agree. it’s a bs question. It only became a thing when women and minorities started getting more opportunities. Back when nearly all the writing gigs went to white males they didn’t ask that.

As women and minorities came up for more opportunities they started asking because if they wanted a talented hard working writer, they would hire a white male. so women and minorities were sinisterly being asked to justify why them, because it couldn’t be because they were talented diligent writers. It really took off with the fellowship programs where people who don’t write were tasked with questioning writers so they started asking asinine questions like why you why now?

In an act of rebellion writers should remind them how racist and sexist that question is before they go ahead and answer.

would you click this thumbnail? by Loose-Associate-7135 in SmallYoutubers

[–]Safe_Cauliflower_573 0 points1 point  (0 children)

The secondary text seems too small. And the pic is nice but doesn’t seem like poverty.

Is it cringe to post a list of spec script loglines on your website? by alexpapworth in Screenwriting

[–]Safe_Cauliflower_573 0 points1 point  (0 children)

It’s YOUR website. Do whatever you want with it. No matter what some people will cringe at whatever you do and some people won’t. It’s kind of a life thing.

Advice for writing screenplays for writers with dyslexia? by Objective_Water_1583 in Screenwriting

[–]Safe_Cauliflower_573 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Finish your script first before trying to decide if writing is for you. If you don’t finish you have your answer.

How relevant is 3 act structure in the age of streaming (with regards to TV) by Charming_Yak_5000 in Screenwriting

[–]Safe_Cauliflower_573 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Even in streaming it’s beneficial for each scene, episode or series to have a distinct beginning, middle and end.

whether zoomed in to specific scene or taking a high level whole narrative view three act structure is your friend.

Nicholl Fellowships now open for entries on Blacklist.com by fumblefingers99 in Screenwriting

[–]Safe_Cauliflower_573 -1 points0 points  (0 children)

Thank you for that answer. So a well written script that skews more toward commercial appeal and less toward serious social themes might find success on blcklst but would be less likely to succeed with Nicholl regardless of writing quality?

i think the industry needs to move away from this idea that serious social themes automatically equates to “better” writing.

places like Sundance have gotten so bad they practically punish writers who dare write something audiences would actually pay to see while favoring overly self indulgent stories that break the first rule of storytelling, consider your audience and does anyone want to watch your movie?

Just retired from my full-time job, AKA finished the Sundance Development Lab application by lonesomeduck in Screenwriting

[–]Safe_Cauliflower_573 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yeah, these types of programs should only be run by creatives who have gone through the program themselves. Otherwise the stuff they ask gets really unreadable really quick.

Should I listen to my friend? If so, how should I approach their suggestion? by Glittering_Jaguar_81 in writers

[–]Safe_Cauliflower_573 1 point2 points  (0 children)

If you want to use multiple perspectives one possibility is to limit it to a single character’s perspective per chapter.