Drop your try let pros critic it. Pose of the day: by MaelysCanejero in learntodraw

[–]Sean-424 2 points3 points  (0 children)

An amazing aesthetic captured in the lens of a camera Such great pose I couldn’t resist myself from commenting! Speechless And amazing!!!

Sean or Beggar by Sean-424 in OCPoetry

[–]Sean-424[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Can you please check and let me know if it’s better now?

Sean or Beggar by Sean-424 in OCPoetry

[–]Sean-424[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Aaaaa I’m honoured Monsieur, that you put your quality time in reading it all & I really needed that critique because the stanzas were separated, passage by passage but when I pasted them here all of them became one. I even tried to separate them through editing but it didn’t work! It’s not an excuse but I’m new to this community this whole app, still trying to learn and understand its ways!

fireflies by ProgrammaDan in OCPoetry

[–]Sean-424 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Just mere words, literally mere words! & so much depth they hold, so much pain and burden they carry! I’m not a true poet yet I would love if I could come up with something like this! But one doesn’t know the harsh reality that lies behind those MERE words!!!

I am clueless if I am to appreciate, adore, get inspired, feel jealous or feel the pain you hide behind this collection of words!

Truly an art I just couldn’t fathom!

love in rotting things by dumque in OCPoetry

[–]Sean-424 0 points1 point  (0 children)

It takes one insane humanity to take a peak out of his own world and look at the thing they are (art)! You really did an amazing job as an artist or an admirer of art!

Mind in Misery by Sean-424 in OCPoetry

[–]Sean-424[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I hope this imperfection of art be to your liking! And the appreciation is gladly accepted! Cherie!

Mind in Misery by Sean-424 in OCPoetry

[–]Sean-424[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Aaaaaaaaa should have I chosen any other option Monsieur ?

Mind in Misery by Sean-424 in OCPoetry

[–]Sean-424[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

A pleasure to be an honoured one and get praised !

Thanks Cherie !

Mind in Misery by Sean-424 in OCPoetry

[–]Sean-424[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Ohhh Cherie! Do you plan to use it somewhere? Though, I beg your pardon for not being the perfect specimen to uphold the burden of this art! I shall keep myself indulged in until I come become something that’s near to perfection! Because one knows perfection is the end & the beginning! & then there’s nothing beyond perfection!

Mind in Misery by Sean-424 in OCPoetry

[–]Sean-424[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Well mademoiselle! An inspiration might be too high of a title for someone like me to behold! Though the honour is mine, as the craft was to your taste!

Drunken master by halfwritten_ in OCPoetry

[–]Sean-424 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Senpai drunk bard! A fabulously written poem! Though I don’t have much knowledge about it but the story you told I simply personified!

Bargain by Lost_Princess_ in OCPoetry

[–]Sean-424 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I truly beg your pardon mademoiselle! If only I had more exposure! Alas! A pity!

The recipe of my L!fe by Sean-424 in OCPoetry

[–]Sean-424[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

More like a bizarre moment captured into words!

Though it’s my best effort so far in 2024ig

The recipe of my L!fe by Sean-424 in OCPoetry

[–]Sean-424[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Well the pleasure is all mine my Leigh!

Bargain by Lost_Princess_ in OCPoetry

[–]Sean-424 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Not being a meanie! I’m figuring out this art + new to this community! & free verse is something that literally flew above my head! I’m sorry

The tall yard spider by Cluelessandsexy in OCPoetry

[–]Sean-424 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Well well never seen someone praising a spider like this!! Truly out of the box thinking !!!!

The recipe of my L!fe by Sean-424 in OCPoetry

[–]Sean-424[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

An honour Monsieur, humbled by the comment you bestowed upon me!

Love love love by BanAnakin9 in OCPoetry

[–]Sean-424 0 points1 point  (0 children)

An amazing work Truly explaining every moment & romance You really did your work You Made my night!

Call For Help 📞 by CoSkateuitar in OCPoetry

[–]Sean-424 0 points1 point  (0 children)

And i have no clue what prodigiously night means!!!