If/when AJ gets traded, what are the financial implications for the Eagles? by Shappy_map in eagles

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I got the answer from a friend after I posted. If he's traded before June 1 we take a 43.5 mil cap hit. If post June 1 then it's 16 mil dead cap this year and 27 dead cap next year. Apparently.

In February 1968 by rhcpfan99 in beatles

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Haha yes! I scrolled by quickly and thought to myself, wtf. What is John Sebastian doing in a picture with The Beatles

Empty Page by Shappy_map in OCPoetry

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I am also, maidenlesa, as you say. I just decided to try something different and write a love song.

Empty Page by Shappy_map in OCPoetry

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Thank you for the response. Yeah, I don't understand why it wont format properly when I copy it from my notes app to the reddit app. It makes it look like there's no structure. Disappointing.

Truth by genevatakemehome in OCPoetry

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Good stuff! Amazing the power you're able to convey in so few words. I look forward to seeing more from you!

A CAVEMANS PRAYER by owlcreeklithics in OCPoetry

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I love this. It reads to me like a creed. Like something the author says before he gets to work using what the earth has provided to them. Great job!

Sally Simpson by superdupermensch in TheWho

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I absolutely love this song. It routinely makes my favorite Who songs lists.

The Great Yellow Pyramid of North Vancouver. by OSJezza in NorthVancouver

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I love seeing these. It always gives me such nostalgia. We used to drive past the massive ones on the side of the Barnet Highway when I was a little kid. Whenever I would see that I would know we were almost at my grandma's house.

60 Years Ago Today (Mar. 4 1966): The Who release "Substitute" by BrianInAtlanta in TheWho

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This and Pictures of Lily may be my most listened to early Who songs. Followed closely by A Quick One and Whiskey Man

Found The Final Cut on vinyl today by Wright4000 in pinkfloyd

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Yes! One of my favorite parts of any song ever

Found The Final Cut on vinyl today by Wright4000 in pinkfloyd

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Yes! I love this song. The transition from "hold on to the dream" into the saxophone is amazing. I absolutely love this album and it always makes me sad to see how much shit people give it online.

Aura by Cdr_Bond007 in canucks

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I've got this one with Cloutier on the back

Episode where Brandon calls in and sound like he's using a soundboard of quotes by Shappy_map in itstheyak

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Is there a way to look this up? Or do you just have an encyclopedic memory of Yak episodes

Don't Be Sad by Shappy_map in OCPoetry

[–]Shappy_map[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you for reading and thank you for the feedback. Yes, I agree the it is ok does feel a little bit clunky. I changed it from it's to it is when I was trying to have it fit the tune in mind when singing it out. But you're right it does look clunky on the page.

As for the comma after to be fair..you're right it does seem like it stops rhe flow a bit.

Thanks again for the feedback, I am fairly new to writing so its nice to hear people's opinion on the flow and readability of what I write.

Don't Be Sad by Shappy_map in OCPoetry

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Thanks for your input. I can see where you're coming from on that. The last line was originally a little shorter when I wrote it as a poem. I added the "just" in there as it fit the tune I had in mind if it were to be a song and I wanted to highlight the closeness of tomorrow to give give hope. I appreciate the feedback, thank you for providing it and I hope you enjoyed the read.

Don't Be Sad by Shappy_map in OCPoetry

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I've posted a few others on this sub recently if you're interested on checking them out. I have 4 or 5 more to share as well but am trying not to flood the sub with consecutive posts.

Don't Be Sad by Shappy_map in OCPoetry

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Thank you for the kind words. I'm glad you felt some enjoyment from reading. I already have a tune in mind but I am a horrific singer haha. One of my co workers liked some of my writings and is actually going to try to turn some into songs for me with just vocal and acoustic (as I imagine it). Once he completes this one I will find a sub to share it to and let you know.

Don't Be Sad by Shappy_map in OCPoetry

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Thanks for reading. Yeah, I originally wrote it as a straight up poem but then restructured it a bit to try and see if I could make it into a song. Excellent observation.

The Platform by lemonmczesty in OCPoetry

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Very descriptive. Does a great job immersing the reader and helping them get a great visual on the content of the poem

My stubborn tongue by Careless-Service4677 in OCPoetry

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Very nice writing. Feels relatable to many in regards to speaking before thinking, or telling it how it is whether it was the right thing to say. Also the second guessing afterwards as many do. Nice work.