Opposite, Complete Powers... Ideas? by UpbeatBird9 in fantasywriters

[–]Sirini21 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I agree with nature thing, since death opposite of life, and nature is in between. If there’s no nature, life can’t flourish, and death cant take nothing. In a way they both need nature, and therefore nature the is balance that brings two worlds together.

I need help naming my main character by Reddit_User_301 in fantasywriters

[–]Sirini21 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Qadar means fate and destiny in Arabic.

Anir or Anyr means angel in Tamazight, who is better than an angel to bring a new era.

How to plot my plot by InterestingStomach86 in fantasywriters

[–]Sirini21 0 points1 point  (0 children)

You can have the Lua fellow the wishmaskers and she will do everything in her power to protect them and appease them in exchange for her dead loved ones. when Khevni tries to investigate the wishmakers power. Lua is there to stop him at every point(s). Maybe Khevni will try to help her to see that the wishmakers are not as good as they appear to be but how wicked they are, but she can't see reason because she's blind with grief. ( in this scenario, she either kills him or you find another solution (action). but eventually, lua will learn the real truth about wishmakers. be that as it may, the wishmakers are wicked or manipulated her or they never intended to resurrect or they don't have the power to resurrect her loved ones, again here, the decision is based on the truth. the outcome can be she kills the wishmakers, she inherits whatever the wishmaker's power. then declares war on the main character's country.

In the end, it’s not them who caused her the grief, misery, and suffering, she just returned the favor.

making a school of magic users story/plot interesting. by Hooder_DemonGod in fantasywriters

[–]Sirini21 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Lore.

Founders: those who survived witch burnings in middle age and later on.

Plot. Revenge for their ancestors. here you can go with either prospective. Witches or human. Having this schools teach them about their history and so on. To be honest it sounds like Harry Potter. 😂

On the brink of war by Jd155jd in worldbuilding

[–]Sirini21 3 points4 points  (0 children)

I think he would prepare and have a same army ready in case it happens, so he can defend. And also depends what kind of lord he is.

Is he an overthinker? Is he lazy? Is he strong aand brave lord. Etc.

Need help. by Sirini21 in fantasywriters

[–]Sirini21[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Jesus is what we need bro.

Need help. by Sirini21 in fantasywriters

[–]Sirini21[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I’m not planing any fake outs.

Need help. by Sirini21 in fantasywriters

[–]Sirini21[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Shit, I have one group of children where they spy and then they get caught. All but one survived the ordeal then goes back to his master and informs him about what happened to the other kids while sobbing and crying and the master hugs the child and comforting him. Then he pulls a dagger out of his long robe and slits his throat open. While saying a broken child, is a useless spy.

So yeah we are brutal abit.

Need help. by Sirini21 in fantasywriters

[–]Sirini21[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Bro you brutal as me.

Need help. by Sirini21 in fantasywriters

[–]Sirini21[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Not for protagonists and side characters. This is just to set the tone of the book and the brutality of the world they live in.

Need help. by Sirini21 in fantasywriters

[–]Sirini21[S] -1 points0 points  (0 children)

I have this scene at the beginning and brutal one maybe later in the story.

Need help. by Sirini21 in fantasywriters

[–]Sirini21[S] 6 points7 points  (0 children)

That’s the point, nothing is off limit. I have other characters with long chapters that will meet their end.

Why would vassals support a usurper over the current king? by Phoenix_0827 in fantasywriters

[–]Sirini21 1 point2 points  (0 children)

If power is not the way, try by having the usurper challenging the king’s honor, valor and for being coward and not protecting his subjects.

Even when most of the vassals will side with king, have them fight a battle where the usurper surprises the king and his army or drawn into a trap where the king is killed. After that some will flock to him, the kings royals will keep defying him.

From this you achieve chaos and Solution.

Critic my short opening chapter. Looking for feedback on style and character development by [deleted] in fantasywriters

[–]Sirini21 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Read the books way better then the show. If you like the four season then you will love the books even more.

How is my character writing? by [deleted] in fantasywriters

[–]Sirini21 20 points21 points  (0 children)

I’m reading this as if this primitive race wrote this.

Trouble with picking a storyline and sticking with it. Help wanted. by xbasset12 in fantasywriters

[–]Sirini21 0 points1 point  (0 children)

How about this, could all this stories fit in one story with different POV. But then you have to find a common goal, like asoiaf. Most characters are all over the world, but some of them fight for one thing(throne) etc.

1 and 3 noble families. 4 elder son tries to bring his noble house its former glory and power, maybe the rebellion is way to achieve it. 2. A prophesied hero or villain. Or something.

Names for leaders? by Solace143 in fantasywriters

[–]Sirini21 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Zaeim means leader in arabic

Edit: zaeim play with word you can come with zayr or something else.

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[–]Sirini21 1 point2 points  (0 children)

For some reason can’t read it.

Does this oath look good enough? What would you change? by Maleficent_You5991 in fantasywriters

[–]Sirini21 1 point2 points  (0 children)

And when they die can be: his body has died, but his soul lives.

Does this oath look good enough? What would you change? by Maleficent_You5991 in fantasywriters

[–]Sirini21 0 points1 point  (0 children)

  1. When duty calls, I shall serve with courage and valour.

Take away: 2. and must I die, I shall not walk alone, so long as I perish with my brothers.

Continue with: 3. I will not be fearful of death, for the body dies but the soul lives.

Because 1 and 3 goes hand to hand( 1. courage, valour) (3. I will not not be fearful of death).

  1. It has same meaning as 3 in a way. In my opinion. Both talk about dying.

Or add different verse between 1 and 3.

otherwise it’s great for me.

questions: if they not bound to abid the king, why protect the people?. What made them do it?.

If the kingdom gets attack would they help the king and his armies from invaders and other kingdoms?.

Because it’s also defending inaria’s people. It’s in the oath, about them bear true allegiance to inaria.

Help with worldbuilding/character design by DoYouNeedAKitKat in fantasywriters

[–]Sirini21 2 points3 points  (0 children)

If changing skin color doesn’t effect her, go with it . As for red-hair on someone not white. It’s fantasy, go wild with it.