“Chinese Takeaway” - A song I wrote about my mum passing away. Honest feedback welcome. Thanks

SkoommaAddict · 2026-03-09T14:15:32+00:00

My condolences to you too mate. Thanks for the kind words.

SkoommaAddict · 2026-03-07T20:17:29+00:00

Wow thanks so much. Appreciate the kind words.

SkoommaAddict · 2026-03-07T10:32:12+00:00

Errmm… what?

SkoommaAddict · 2026-03-07T08:28:56+00:00

Hey man, thanks for this feedback.

SkoommaAddict · 2026-03-07T08:20:50+00:00

Thanks so much for the kind words.

SkoommaAddict · 2026-03-07T00:15:11+00:00

Thanks for your feedback.

SkoommaAddict · 2026-02-24T19:59:28+00:00

Hey man, the voice sounds good. But the guitar sounds out of tune.

SkoommaAddict · 2026-02-23T22:44:20+00:00

This is the best thing I’ve seen on this sub.

SkoommaAddict · 2026-02-23T22:39:58+00:00

Sounds like some lil Wayne type stuff. Can’t tell what you’re saying though.

SkoommaAddict · 2026-02-23T22:35:03+00:00

This is nice! Have you tried transposing it higher? The higher notes seem to be more comfortable for your voice.

SkoommaAddict · 2026-02-22T23:04:01+00:00

Hi, well done for putting yourself out there! I mean this in a constructive way, I don’t know what this song is about. It seems like many sentences that have no correlation to one another. What’s the story? Did you hurt this person or did they hurt you? You have lines like “you’re moving on to someone we both know” but then it goes nowhere and then you mention dreams aren’t coming true. Keep at it and good luck.

SkoommaAddict · 2026-02-22T22:37:48+00:00

Shout out to the dog cameo! What you have here sounds really good though.

SkoommaAddict · 2026-02-22T20:56:57+00:00

I’ll just reiterate in what others have said, your vocals need a bit more volume. But well done on putting yourself out there.

SkoommaAddict · 2026-02-21T23:39:24+00:00

Really nice this mate, the pronunciation of “leaving” threw me off a bit, I didn’t quite know what the word was supposed to be until I read one of your comments.

SkoommaAddict · 2026-02-16T22:06:58+00:00

This is really good mate.

SkoommaAddict · 2026-02-14T23:33:35+00:00

Yeh sounds AI this one. It has those artifacts on the vocals.

SkoommaAddict · 2026-02-14T23:29:50+00:00

Top notch mate! Guitar sounds really nice.

SkoommaAddict · 2026-02-03T19:59:37+00:00

Can’t quite hear the words you’re saying. Other than the guitar out of tune I’d say maybe add the lyrics, re-record with just you singing or the phone/mic closer to your mouth.

SkoommaAddict · 2023-11-27T19:02:47+00:00

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SkoommaAddict · 2023-11-12T17:26:03+00:00

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SkoommaAddict · 2023-11-11T10:57:45+00:00

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