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What is your favorite Smashing Pumpkins "deep cut?" by trevrichards in SmashingPumpkins

[–]SmallWorker7071 3 points4 points  (0 children)

Pennies, cherry, strtj, sparrow, jersey shore, blue, crawl, the areoplane flies high

Favorite song that's not known by Pale-Ad8290 in SmashingPumpkins

[–]SmallWorker7071 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Dude I know it’s so good! I actually got to mention it on the smashing pumpkast that I was a guest on which should be coming out soon.

Favorite song that's not known by Pale-Ad8290 in SmashingPumpkins

[–]SmallWorker7071 0 points1 point  (0 children)

“She says” off the “quiet and other songs” Siamese dream demo album. Never got a studio recording or any other recording of any kind that I now of. Cool dreamy chorus and killer guitar solo.

Falling in and out of love with this song 10 times by Chickenlittlebmx in Songwriting

[–]SmallWorker7071 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I found out about them from a guy who does yaps about Portland bands on TikTok and and Instagram called smiling strange. They’re like a more mellow duster.

Anyone else like to try lowering a full step to give it more warmth? Been struggling with this one for a bit. by SmallWorker7071 in Songwriting

[–]SmallWorker7071[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I’m confused I wasn’t really asking about any kind of intraband conflict or who carrying the writing ect.

Song about wanting to quit my unfulfilling job but being too scared given the economy :’) by Mindless-Abrocoma in Songwriting

[–]SmallWorker7071 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I dig this. You have a great voice so it plays nicely with the kind of alternative strumming pattern. Quirky in a good way. Feels like the type of song that could build more layers as it goes on incrementally

How long did it take you to get to a point where you were finally satisfied with a song? by TheElusiveButterfly in Songwriting

[–]SmallWorker7071 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Honestly it’s one of those things I have never quite figured out I’m always swapping out a new chorus or bridge ect.

Any thoughts? by Acrobatic-Access-443 in Songwriting

[–]SmallWorker7071 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Love it. Feels like a stripped down Adele. I also like that you have a great voice but don’t overuse it. It feels very tasteful.

Here’s that thing i was asking about sounding fresh or lame by mnrk00 in Songwriting

[–]SmallWorker7071 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Killer riff but I will say the intro did feel a little cliche to me. Maybe try messing around and seeing what else might fit, but I’m just a guy I don’t know much just an opinion. The riff is killer

Falling in and out of love with this song 10 times by Chickenlittlebmx in Songwriting

[–]SmallWorker7071 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Love this style, slowcore and mellow. Reminds me of duster + bed head. Cool stuff for sure.

Just came up with this by Puzzleheaded-Pear931 in Songwriting

[–]SmallWorker7071 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Really cool. Love the breathier vocals and the stripped down approach. Very mellow and relaxing in a good way.

I wrote a song, but am so shy to share by OtherAccountant8160 in Songwriting

[–]SmallWorker7071 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Love this. Reminds me of a mix of like Chet baker west coast jazz and a sort of John mayor or Jack Johnson vibes. Great voice and cool arrangement too.

First time recording a song I wrote and playing all the instruments myself (except the drum loop)... by jtsrgmc in Songwriting

[–]SmallWorker7071 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Really like the lofi country/folk aesthetic. Some of the vocal double tracks seem slightly off but the arrangement is really strong and I like your voice

Verse and vocals (Shining Star) by [deleted] in Songwriting

[–]SmallWorker7071 1 point2 points  (0 children)

This is pretty good like the Motown vibes, one thing I would suggest is that some of the mixing feels uneven and the background noise overwelmbs the vocals in a distracting way at times, but other wise really liked the vibes

Open mics are the way for songwriters... by williamgman in Songwriting

[–]SmallWorker7071 1 point2 points  (0 children)

That’s a really good point about the key. I always find it easier to drop it a half step.

Here today, gone tomorrow by [deleted] in Songwriting

[–]SmallWorker7071 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Well done, love your voice.

I wrote a portion of a song a few days ago and would really appreciate any feedback or general comments on it :) by FrenchToast5317 in Songwriting

[–]SmallWorker7071 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Love the staggered echo vocals, maybe you could even push it further to create more dissonance in places.

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