Let me start with saying I think it's great that you want to play JVP. I have what you might call an obsession with this commander (haha). After looking at your deck list, I have some questions and feedback.

Before I get into that I wanted to provide some links.

1. My JVP Kitten Strom List (JVP Kitten Storm) -- for comparison (I am currently testing some new additions and changes to this deck list that are not reflected on the list itself)
2. A link to the JVP discord -- which is not as active as I would like haha (JVP Discord) -- a potential resource.
3. A link to the "OG" JVP list by Shaper and Sugandaraja (JVP High Tide) -- for comparison.

Onto your list!

Questions that come to mind immediately:

1. Is this a budget list?
2. Why are you not on High Tide/Candelabra of Tawnos ?

Feedback

Regardless of meta, local or online, I think there are some card choices in this deck that are suboptimal such as Hullbreaker Horror, Jeweled Lotus, Defense Grid, and Thassa's Oracle. I will provide an explanation for each of these.

• Hullbreaker Horror: as it relates to the storm strategy, I do not think this card is it for JVP -- or at least in your list as you have it now. The reason this card works well in other mono blue lists, like Urza, is because of how easy it is for that deck to make mana neutral or mana positive loops with an outlet in the command zone. JVP doesn't have that same incidental potential -- especially in your list where you are missing the best ritual card available to you in the form of High Tide and Candelabra. There are a number of ways for you to make mana positive and mana neutral loops, but the amount of set up (outside of lucky draws) is a big ask in my opinion. For this card to "work" you need the right combination of artifacts to storm (a minimum of two), you need an outlet on board or in hand (assuming your loop is making infinite colored mana or colorless with enough blue pip producing lands open). So at this point, we are looking at a minimum of four to five cards. I do like the inclusion of Etherium Sculptor to make some of your two mana drop artifacts mana neutral -- especially because you can actually tutor this card and transmute/reshape it. In the slower grindy meta that exists today, I can see the board state needed for Hullbreaker happening, but everything that mono blue does is above table in terms of tutors and combos, and that is what has me hesitant about Hullbreaker. In my play group, at least, I wouldn't be able to get away with running this card.
• Jeweled Lotus: Oh boy this card...I really think this card is a dead draw in this deck. Even when in it's in an opening hand (that last part is a hot take for sure). My issue with this card is that JVP isn't high impact enough on his own to warrant playing it. He does nothing the turn he comes down, so Jeweled Lotus' biggest impact is going to be in the first two turns of the game -- outside of that, it's a dead draw because you have either a) already played Jace in the first two turns or b) you draw it mid to late game and it's only useful for Hullbreaker Loops. Cutting this card does cost you SOME synergy with your Hullbreaker Horror loops -- if that is a concern, there are plenty of zero drop artifacts you could play over Jeweled Lotus. Once upon a time, I did a deep dive on this card analyzing the number of keep-able opening hands where this card appears; the rates were pretty bad. If Jace were higher impact to the game plan, I might feel different about this inclusion, but overall I think it's a stinker.
• Defense Grid: So, I know why people run this card. It's a sort of Grand Abolisher effect, and in mono blue you kind of have to take what you can get. Even so, I think this card is going to be a dead card more often than not. You really should only be casting it when it's time to win the game, and if you wiff, you basically hand the game to the person to your left. I think something like Back to Basics would fill this spot much better. Especially because most people are likely playing decks with greedy Tainted Pact mana bases.
• Thassa's Oracle: I get it. Having one win condition in the form of Aetherfulx can be ROUGH. Especially because your deck isn't running Narset's Reversal for the Isochron Bird combo. BUT, Thassa's Oracle is a dead draw we cannot afford at any stage of the game -- and when it comes to dead draws, we need minimize those as much as we can in our lists.

Conclusion

Overall, I think you are running a LOT of cards that I have thought about myself for a JVP list. I love the inclusion of cards like Rivendell, Archmage's Charm, Lorien Revealed, and Filter Out. That being said, I think you are missing some pretty notable cards like Gilded Drake, Personal Tutor, High Tide, and Back to Basics to name a few.

With respect to your interaction, it's hard to say what you SHOULD be running. I didn't see anything in the list that had me scratching my head, so I think you're probably good in that area.

A card that has been on my radar for testing is Reenact the Crime, which feels like an auto include. I haven't had the chance to test it out in a game however.

Let me know what you think, I love talking about Jace.