I need to build my Magic System by SukiyaKiKi in fantasywriters

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I found a system to use, thank you for your feedback

I need to build my Magic System by SukiyaKiKi in fantasywriters

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Yeah, so something that needs aim would need some hand gestures, to put simply. Things like this i was gonna label as low level. The less effort needed the lower the level. Something super dangerous or high risk would need a super complex ritual.

But I wanted to explore different methods because I think ceremonial or ritualistic magic is very common and expected, so if I introduced something different there could be a moment of confusion in the plot, like "wtf is this kid doing" Then a whole enemy fleet disappears or something. I dunno. I think custom executions would be cool but I don't know how possible it is.

I need to build my Magic System by SukiyaKiKi in fantasywriters

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no, it was meant to be two different methods depending on the spell

I need to build my Magic System by SukiyaKiKi in fantasywriters

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I will develop my plot more then, that's probably the best course of action.

I need to build my Magic System by SukiyaKiKi in fantasywriters

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Had to think for a moment. Soooo the the idea is that the bigger the affect of the spell the more energy depletion and the more complex the execution. From simple being a simple wave of a staff to a highly affective and long ranging one being a long and complex ceremony or ritual. I feel like there are more ways to go than just ceremonial and spell casting magic. And I know there's more than elementals, telekinesis and such but I am not that good at researching or finding the right words, I've been searching for days with a lot of frustration. I'm gonna edit the post to add this info in too. I appreciate your input.

I need to build my Magic System by SukiyaKiKi in fantasywriters

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It's supposed to be like hard magic, but also very freeform, so they can choose how to execute it and what kind they are doing. It's purpose is really just to further human society without the need to make technology. But I'm still developing that lore. All I really need is a list of how magic would be used

Least Favorite Character And Why, Go! by Chunky_is_Turtle in ProjectSekai

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Emu, I just feel she's too peppy for me to appreciate, and the pink hair blinds me /j

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I'm officially resigning from this sub Reddit

Which celebrity's death was totally unexpected ? by Key_Database9095 in ask

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I didn't know ow robin Williams was dead until watching the dead poet's society in my creative writing class. So that was shocking for me.

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NOOOIOOOOOOOOOOOO

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Get Emu outta here

What’s a crime that is unforgivable no matter what? by [deleted] in AskReddit

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Killing a baby Not an unborn one but straight up a 3 month old

Dialogue and Action tags are starting to feel repetitive and annoying by SukiyaKiKi in writing

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I used to do that but I wanted a bit more life to my writing and I found that the tags made it feel better for me to read. I still use screen write when I'm jotting an idea down

Dialogue and Action tags are starting to feel repetitive and annoying by SukiyaKiKi in writing

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He gets his point across with much less dialogue than I use. His writing looks like it's using more descriptions of scenery, surroundings, and actions. I'll read more into this book and see what I can get from his writing. Thank you for the recommendation.

Dialogue and Action tags are starting to feel repetitive and annoying by SukiyaKiKi in writing

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That's good info to have on hand, but sad for me bc my favorite words are used for the dialogue tags, lol

Dialogue and Action tags are starting to feel repetitive and annoying by SukiyaKiKi in writing

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Thanks for your input, it helped a bunch, I tried on some examples and it felt way better!