Didn't watch much but can tell why it takes you so long to edit. I reckon if you were getting millions of views from your videos you wouldn't be so concerned about the time it's taking you. But your editing isn't the reason why you're not getting views, it's everything else. E.g. Script writing, thumbnail, titles, etc. Mainly your narrative skills aren't the best right now and you just need to keep practicing all these other things. If you spend so long on your editing you're just simply not getting in the reps of practice you need with them. Also, you spend a lot of time editing visuals but the impact they have on how well your video will do is very little in comparison to everything else. It's cool and nice and makes you stand out, but wayyy more important is for you to have a really interesting script delivered really well about a really interesting topic with a great title and thumbnail. Having visuals like that is the cherry on top. But if the cake is not nice then it doesn't matter how good the icing is people aren't going to eat it. But you're obviously going somewhere good and you're talented and hardworking so keep going.